Comments | runaway_tales: flavour of the day, rhubarb and strawberry with hot fudge, malt and fresh fruit

ninablues in runaway_tales

flavour of the day, rhubarb and strawberry with hot fudge, malt and fresh fruit

Feb 20, 2011 22:13

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Death Flu
Rating: PG (language)
Challenge: FOTD: malinger, Rhubarb ‘My Treat’ #13: if you can’t say something nice (someone takes offence at Newson’s potty mouth), Strawberry #2: curtains
Toppings/Extras: hot fudge, malt, fresh peaches, fresh strawberries, fresh blueberries
Wordcount: 1,890
Summary: Even ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [challenge] rhubarb, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] strawberry, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries, [challenge] flavor of the day

Comments 13

kay_brooke February 21 2011, 21:11:26 UTC

Haha, even Newson is a little scared of Adele when she's not feeling well.

And of course Adam is the one person whose first instinct is to try to help her instead of run away. I think he's one of my favorite characters in this.

ninablues February 23 2011, 17:11:49 UTC

I wish Adam played a bigger part because he is such a sweet little dork. I like to imagine that Adele bullies him slightly less after this. Well, for a while anyway. XD Thanks!

nathskywalker February 23 2011, 13:47:43 UTC

Oh Adele, can't ever take a day off. I think her reactions are precious and funny for outsiders although I'd be totally annoyed if I were in her stead. And I would have stayed in bed.

Also, are Demy Voskoy and Moxley your new baddies you were talking about?

It's nice to see Hallie again. For some reason, I really like her.

ninablues February 23 2011, 17:14:06 UTC

Adele never, ever stays in bed. She's crazy like that. I can't imagine her having a lie-in ever. And yep, Voskoy and Moxley are the new villains and are pretty much taking over-- I'm changing it so that Newson has very little involvement, and Voskoy's the one that gets killed in the end after he shoots Sim. Though that's still vague and being sketched out.

Thanks!