Title: Water Falls
Author:
MrsTaterFormat & Word Count: one-shot, 2256 words
Rating: R
Prompt: #3 - distance
Warning: sex
Summary: The Battle Of the Seven Potters bereaves Tonks of her mentor after an attempt on her life. The aftermath.
Author's Note: This is only the third Deathly Hallows-era piece I've attempted since last June, and it's still
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DH issues aside, this is lovely. I especially like the way you take the intensity of their feelings for Mad-Eye and their hatred of Bellatrix and Snape, and propel that right through into an intense encounter between the two of them. Then the feeling of peace that ends the story is a lovely sense of resolution (for now, at least).
...soldiering and loyalty and need converge into man and woman, husband and wife, lovers--who have only each other left in all the wide world, who nearly lost one another tonight, who have already had too many close shaves, who might lose each other tomorrow.That line is such a perfect pivot for the transition in the mood of this piece, and it's ( ... )
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I'm glad you are! I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
I've actually had ideas ever since reading DH about how to make some of the apparently odd things about Remus's and Tonks's characterizations fit plausibly into the Kaleidoscope ficverse. "All That I Am" is definitely part of that process. What's been hardest for me, though, was getting to where I could even think about DH long enough to write DH-era fics. And what's finally helped with that is (rrgh, I seem to be confessing this all over LJ this week)..."By A Thread." Heh. I like angsty when I know there's a happy ending waiting, so letting my brain go AU makes DH-era fic fun (well, except for poor Ted). I will keep "Kaleidoscope" itself totally canon-compliant, but knowing that I've got a canon-denial scenario to ( ... )
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That's my thing -- I don't think anything from the book, except the ending, of course, really conflicts with anything I wanted to do in Caring For Magical Creatures. I don't have a problem with the storyline up until the end, it's just the way it's executed so sloppily and open to rather negative interpretation that frustrates me as a writer. I was hoping DH would be R/T's chance to stop having to justify the characters' actions, which is why I've mainly avoided writing DH fic thus far. But I'm finding it surprisingly more enjoyable to address these things than I expected. Maybe it's this new Tonks-centric angle on it. I think I can safely say I'll never carry a fic all the way to the end of DH, though, because I just don't believe it ( ... )
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"She said she couldn't decide whether it would be more fun to kill me herself, or to capture us both and feed me to you next full moon. She asked if you'd mind her playing with your food first."
That was so disturbing, but so amazingly Bellatrix, I can imagine her saying this to Tonks. So well done with all the characters you mentioned keeping them very much in character throughout the story, never ever faltering.
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Thanks for your words about the Bellatrix bit, too. I'm always kind of worried about going over the top with her, so I'm very glad you found her IC.
I really appreciate your feedback. :)
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But as lovely at that part was, the search for Mad Eye's body and all that involved, helped take the sting out of that scene from DH. Of course the stressful situation and his concern for his wife would make Remus a bit short, it's just nice to to have it explained more fully. And you do a fabulous job, as always.
Oh and that comment from Bellatrix? Woah. She's seriously twisted.
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Again you paint the images in awesome relief and realism in my mind, and I am in awe!
-- this goes directly to be added to memories. Beautiful!
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