Congratulations on posting your first piece! It feels pretty good, doesn't it? :D
I really liked the way you set this piece up, with all of the flashbacks. They were both charming and deliciously hot, and I liked how they really gave the reader a sense of how these two are together. I also loved how they knew each other well enough so that the planned surprise worked. Oh, and in my book, you get extra points for the use of toys, because I love them so much. <3 A fabulous first piece, and I look forward to more!
I felt really nervous posting, then I woke up and felt pretty good about it :). I didn't realize though, how amazing it feels when people comment! I'm glad my vision of Grimm and Ichi was able to come through when you read it, and toys make my day. Thank you for spending the time to read this and responding :D.
I haven't consciously thought of adding to the story, but if some bunny comes along that fits the mood of this one I would. Can't make any promises though :). Thank you for reading!
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I really liked the way you set this piece up, with all of the flashbacks. They were both charming and deliciously hot, and I liked how they really gave the reader a sense of how these two are together. I also loved how they knew each other well enough so that the planned surprise worked. Oh, and in my book, you get extra points for the use of toys, because I love them so much. <3 A fabulous first piece, and I look forward to more!
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Thank you for spending the time to read this and responding :D.
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Thank you for reading!
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