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kamikaze43v3r June 24 2010, 07:31:58 UTC
That was a really interesting and hot read <3 I don't really like the outfit thingie, but damn, the writing made up for it, so awesome job and thank you for writing this!! :D

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roostersauce28 June 24 2010, 08:49:21 UTC
I really appreciate you taking time to read my story and the honest feedback! Thank you :)

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gypsygrrl420 June 24 2010, 12:23:10 UTC
That was insanely hot! Thank you! And good for Grimmjow for managing to restrain himself for once *g*

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roostersauce28 June 24 2010, 17:11:30 UTC
Thank you! I don't think Grimmjow would really be able to restrain himself for anything less than fear of losing ;3.

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tracker_arrow June 24 2010, 14:35:45 UTC
Oh I really liked this!
I actually felt kind of nervous while reading to find out what Ichigo was up to.
I love this pairing and especially the way you have written it with the flash backs :D

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roostersauce28 June 24 2010, 17:14:02 UTC
Yay! I'm glad it turned out to be a bit suspenseful as I'd hoped; thank you :)

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bayrdsm June 25 2010, 04:04:50 UTC
Super sexy! I really enjoyed the anticipation and appreciated the unconventional ending ;D (Plus the possessiveness of Grimmjow is, uhh unf)

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roostersauce28 June 25 2010, 06:31:05 UTC
Thank you :)
I don't think any amount of writing and revising I could have done, would have done justice to the build-up, so I'm happy you appreciated the ending!

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freyalilith June 25 2010, 09:54:06 UTC
Oh oh oh.... wow.....
That was so.freaking.HOT, I cant describe how hot that was!
Grimmjow's flashbacks were extremly vivid and I loved the thought of Ichi sitting behind the door listening to him and knowing what he was thinking.
Very very well written! Hope to see lots more!

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roostersauce28 June 26 2010, 20:01:10 UTC
Ichi might have been thinking about breaking down the door himself, listening to Grimmjow ;P. I appreciate you taking the time to read this and comment :D

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