untitled sernando fic

Aug 29, 2008 09:53


Title: untitled

Rating: Pg-13

Disclaimer: Obviously I don’t own. They’d be running around naked if I did.

Characters: Fernando Torres, Sergio Ramos

everything you do is coming back to you )

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beautiskyhigh August 29 2008, 15:45:56 UTC
nghhhhhhhhh god can I go back to bed with them? Please, I swear I'll be a good girl and just sleep, I'll just close my eyes and enjoy the warmth of those two bodies there.

*is now stuck in her own little world*

um yes, so I loved this seriously. I still though think that there should be another one with naked Sergio doing laundry...just cos.

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rizzyr August 29 2008, 17:31:40 UTC
No no no!! You may *NOT* go to bed with them....they need to be alone! *pokes* Just no.

LOL What is it with you and naked!Sergio??!! *pause* Oh yes, well okay....naked!Sergio would be pretty awesome. Hmmmm.....

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art_blake August 29 2008, 16:33:20 UTC
I don't like Sernando (ok, it's not that I really dislike this pairing, I'm just not interested in it anymore) but I like your other fanfics (which I haven't reviewed because I suck at these things -"Cesc, you are not going to make this test", along with other quotes, is long since an insider joke between me and my friend..."It was a MOVIE!"), so I read it anyway.
As I still don't like Sernando and therefore can't really feel with them, I can't say much about this fanfic (yes, I do realize this is much of a senseless review then).
So I just let you know that I read it and skilfully manoeuvre the topic to OMFSHFOSUF5sß´d0ru DANNY!!
This man has such an impact on me - the other day I was like "I want to have a tattoo so I can show it to Danny!"

So, uhm, bye.

PS: When you started with 'a sound quite like thunder rumbling in the distance', I thought you were gonna write it was Sergio snoring.

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rizzyr August 29 2008, 17:34:44 UTC
I'm glad that you took the time to read this even if you don't feel the pairing. :D That actually means a lot to me.

Oh gosh, you remember lines from my fics?? *blushes* That's really awesome. Thanks!!! :D

DAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!! I seriously love that man too. <333 My goal in life is to be tattooed by him some day. I realize that will never happen but it's still a goal I have. LOL

HAHAHA!! Sergio snoring!! That would be crackilicious! :D

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art_blake August 29 2008, 20:24:05 UTC
:D

You know, it would actually make a pretty hot fic, I think, Danny tattooing somebody, or babies getting tattoos together. I just can't think of a context now *is sleepy*
Well, maybe it's not that hopeless, he's tattooing that guy after all, isn't he? Maybe later he'll have his own tattoo studio. Oh boy, now I have the idea for a crazy AU fic.

On second thought, Sergio snoring would be a real turn-off, don't you think?

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rizzyr August 30 2008, 02:30:38 UTC
Well I don't know about stories with Dan tattooing anyone, but acrayonsmile wrote one where he pierced Nick Bendtner of Arsenal while they had sex. It was quite hot....one of my fave fics by her actually! :D

Haha. It would be such a turnoff but then again, it's Sergio. He warrants special circumstances. LOL

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acrayonsmile August 29 2008, 18:53:01 UTC
hey, just to let you know in the nicest way possible, you jumped tenses in the first paragraph from past to present to past again.

otherwise give me a second to <3 you because the image of Fernando wrapped in a bedsheet is wonderful.

"But it’s all we have." so sad.

i like that Sergio was more emotional and not...well... prepetually horny.

poor boys. it'll be ok.

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rizzyr August 29 2008, 21:21:50 UTC
*slaps forehead* Oh geeeeeez!!!!! I thought I had caught that when I was typing it up too! Grrr. Thanks for telling me!

I was very happy while writing Fernando wrapped in a bedsheet. :D The image stuck with me the entire time. LOL

I so saw Sergio as the emotional one in this b/c well....he's the one putting it all on the line with Nando really. He's the one invading a relationship between Nando and Olalla and he's the third wheel. And while I love horny!Sergio in fics, I love emotional real Sergio as well. <333

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_unashamed August 29 2008, 18:56:38 UTC
That was lovely. i do feel for Sergion. *hugs*

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rizzyr August 30 2008, 02:31:01 UTC
Awww thanks!! <3

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dance_fairies August 29 2008, 20:46:27 UTC
<3 Love this.
Love the way you show the guilt they both feel, makes you feel sad for them.
And I like the emotional Sergio :D

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rizzyr August 30 2008, 02:32:06 UTC
Thank you! :D

I quite like emotional!Sergio as well. He was hard to write, but I really enjoyed it. <3

Aww your icon is cute!

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dance_fairies August 30 2008, 20:45:12 UTC
Ooh yeah I can imagine, I cant write emotional :P Tis too hard :P

Hehe thanks! And I like yours! Lol that video makes me laugh!

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