seriously was crying T_T, because you wrote it so well, and I love it, but so much pain. The end made me grin like crazy, and I had to reread it a couple of times just to make sure I didn't imagine it. Thanks for to little bit of happy! <3
It will take awhile, but let me list the things I love about this fic:
I love that Sho pays a price for normalcy; that Ohno drifts away without a four-man anchor to hold him steady; that Nino can withdraw until he's almost unreachable; that Aiba looks backwards a lot and has to learn to look forwards again; and that Jun stopped looking backwards out of pain and then realizes that maybe it isn't such a bad thing after all.
But most of all, I love that you captured what they each lost by losing Arashi. Because if there's one thing I believe, it's that being in proximity to each other makes each of them shine so much brighter.
I think I read this wondering how far you could take the level of angst, and then the ending just popped out like the perfect finishing swirl of whipped cream to a cake.
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Great Fic! kind of sad but still a really good read...the day that Arashi stops being Arashi...hopefully won't happen until i'm super SUPER old ^___^v
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This was wonderfully written ^_^ Thank you for sharing.
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It ended sorta happy-ish, right?
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<3
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but yeah font size was hard on the eyes, especially since I'm kinda old! ^__^
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Also, I adjusted the font size ;)
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I love that Sho pays a price for normalcy; that Ohno drifts away without a four-man anchor to hold him steady; that Nino can withdraw until he's almost unreachable; that Aiba looks backwards a lot and has to learn to look forwards again; and that Jun stopped looking backwards out of pain and then realizes that maybe it isn't such a bad thing after all.
But most of all, I love that you captured what they each lost by losing Arashi. Because if there's one thing I believe, it's that being in proximity to each other makes each of them shine so much brighter.
I think I read this wondering how far you could take the level of angst, and then the ending just popped out like the perfect finishing swirl of whipped cream to a cake.
Thank you for that ^__^ ~~
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