Fic: Passing Currents (4/4)

[rev02a]

Title: Passing Currents
Author: rev02a
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, violence, violent and sexual discussion, potentially seen as a character bash
Beta: comestodecember  who is wonderful and has more patience than anyone I know, and who also does not have purple hair, for which, I am very grateful.
Summary: Gwen gets a taste of clean-up after a case is finished.

Comments

[mikabird]

Very impressive! A great look at Torchwood's underbelly, along with all the delicious Gwen-bashing *smiles* Sadly, her whole demeanour was so very in character. Please, please write a sequel featuring Jack tearing her a new one and actually, seriously, punishing her! Please? Pwetty pwetty pwease?

[rev02a]

Thanks so much for reading... I'm actually already on my next project, but someone else is welcome to run with the idea!

[milady_dragon]

That was brilliant! What started out as a look at just what Ianto does for clean-up turned into a mess, and it was Gwen's fault because she didn't report finding that cat box...loved it.

And I think I'm with everyone else when I ask for a sequel and Jack's raking her over the coals for her mistakes...just because she thinks she isn't going to be punished for what happened. All those poor people and animals...

[rev02a]

I was more upset about writing the death of the animals than the people-- what does that say about me?! I would love for Gwen to get punished, but she isn't going to get it. I tried to stay true to the show, and, as we all know, Gwen never has to deal with her actions. Thanks for reading!

[milady_dragon]

I know...but it really is a shame. I love a good Gwen-smackdown fic! :)

[jsks]

brilliant! now if we could only see gwen's punishment.

[rev02a]

Thanks, but alas, we won't!

[beesandbrews]

Brilliant plot. Excellent team interaction. Great voices. Very interesting choice doing this from Gwen's POV, some of her thoughts did her no favors, but did align in terms of what her actions might have been if this was an actual case file.

Well done.

[rev02a]

Thanks so much. I feel guilty when I write a character this way because I always feel like everybody deserves some sort of respect. In the end, her motivation was just too confusing... I really didn't intend to write a full on bash fic, but, my god, why does she do some of the things she does? Thanks so much for the read... and happy birthday, again!

[kiitos13]

Wow, absolutely wonderful and definitely going in my memories!

[rev02a]

Thank you!