[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 12a

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 12/22
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's

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[shunluv]

So happy finally update for this. Will read later xD

[rennie_88]

<3 take your time :)

(btw i'm sorry i never sent you that part of 3kiss story, i realized i had edited and saved on the original version so its gone XD haha but it was basically a date rape scene originally XDDD oh dear haha)

[yakuso5u]

Finally!!!! (she says, a week after you updated... >_<). As always it won't do you justice but I'll try and for once, I have coherent things to say XDD (besides the fact that Yoochun is soooooooo hopelessly in love and that I need part B so it should be "short"... maybe XD).

First about Yoochun, because everything he says or does is going against the 'hero' cliché and that's GREAT and you're amazing. He's scared, helpless, cowardly maybe, though I don't like saying that because heeeey... who on earth can judge him rn??
And it struck me in that chapter just how alone he was. Only Junsu, a guy he's known for a few months only, and it looks perfectly logical to me that Junsu becomes the only person Yoochun would like to be strong for... it's like no one ever really put his faith in him or believes him able to face what's happening, and in that situation, it's hard to find the courage to act as a Crown Prince. Well that's what was going on in my mind as I read the whole passage about Chunnie watching the city from the castle XD

[rennie_88]

finally was exactly how i felt about posting too LOL T^T cuz part b was one of earliest scenes i wrote for the story, but dind't kno how to connect it = = tentacles were like body bound and locked in a box .....

hmmmmm i guess i kinda did make him cowardly :) but i like him that way XD cuz 'hero' persona is not one of his strengths. tho originally he was supposed to be like shining white prince charming it turned into this, but like you said he's totally in love which makes it all okay haha! *_*
its true. no one believes in him so he doesnt even kno how to believe in himself. so on that perspective tho i think the whole yoosu part he came off as childish and ..naively selfish maybe? :S need to do some thinking to avoid potential character hole that chun might not be able to climb out of O_O !

hehe im glad u liked yoosu tho :) finally get to show how they dont actually really match and are not destined to be *_* ~~~~ in ur face karma junsu!

short and serious is <3 just as long and flailing is too hehehehehe <3 <3 thank u for

[yakuso5u]

I really dunno how you can write your favorite parts first LOL Cos it's just the idea of writing them later that can oblige me to write... like, "two chapters more and you get to write THAT" :P

I like cowardly. It means that when he'll have to be brave for Min, he'll go against that side of him, and become a better person for his Changmin, and the whole world will stare amazed XDDDD
I do think he's a little childish... like he was prepared for a peaceful, comfy reign, and suddenly everything turns horrible but he isn't ready to face that kind of dangerous situation at all. Or rather than childish, very inexperienced? Maybe he never really asked himself the important questions about being a King later XD

*watches karma swoops down on Junsu* X'D