fic: "Whatever's Gonna Happen Tonight (1/3)" . PG . Primeval . Becker/Jess

[renisanz]

Title: "Whatever's Gonna Happen Tonight" (1/2)
Author: renisanz
Rating: PG
Words: 1,523
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: Hilary Becker/Jessica Parker
Spoilers: Up to Series 4 finale.
Notes: pink_flame_87 's piece for Write for Relief which was hosted by the wonderful allthingsholy . I suppose this fits the third prompt.Thanks to jazzrose343  for the beta help with British English. :)

Comments

SQUEE! (and other more intelligent things)

[pink_flame_87]

I love it! You had me giggling like crazy at the thought of Jess dropping his keys down her shirt (and of Jess driving by Becker's house which, let's be honest, she totally would lol). I can't wait to read the rest and am very, very grateful for your willingness to take up the prompt! : )

Re: SQUEE! (and other more intelligent things)

[renisanz]

Thank you. I took me a good while to come up with an angle from which to approach this fic. There are a lot of good ideas that have already been written. Plus, thus is my first time tackling these characters and I really wanted to tread carefully. I'm exciting to finish the next chapter, once I figure out what Becker's flat will look like. I'm getting ideas as I type this, actually. :)

[bailey1ak]

I was so incredibly excited when I saw that you newest story was not only Primeval, but Jess/Becker to boot! Loved it, well done and in character, but above all just so much fun to read. So, soooo looking forward to more!

[renisanz]

Thanks so much for both reviews. :) I'm so glad you enjoy the story so far. The next chapter will be up in the next few days. I just have a bit of research I need to let sink in, esp. concerning Becker's school background. :)

[yavie_namarie]

*cracks up*
That is so Jess, for her to drop his keys down her shirt and then be embarrassed about it... XD

This is so cute, I'm absolutely loving it thus far. Can't wait until the next part!
*thumbs up*

[renisanz]

Thanks! Hope you enjoy the next part equally well. :)