Heroes: Twenty-Seven Messages

[remixabot]

Original Fic: Damn the Man (and Suffer the Little Children), by kleenexcow
Remix: Twenty-Seven Messages [Gabriel & Noah 872 Words, Rated PG, Warnings: language, disturbing themes], by lotus0kid

Comments

[visiblemarket]

Awww. That just about killed me. Damn the cuteness, it makes me feel things I shouldn't. I really loved the progression of everything, and the idea of doing it through phone messages is brilliant.

[lotus0kid]

Thanks! The messages are directly from the original story: Gabriel called Mohinder twenty-seven times. Mohinder, what do I do with a child? and I’m in Costa Verde, please call me back and Oh, God, I can’t do this! Mohinder never picked up. I just elaborated on them.

[visiblemarket]

They were both hilarious and aw inducing. And reminded me of poor what's-her-names messages in The Incredibles, if you've ever seen that.

[lotus0kid]

Ha! Yeah, I know what you're talking about. I love that movie.

[astrogirl2]

This is... disturbingly cute. :)

[lotus0kid]

Heh, well, if it has to be cute, at least it's disturbingly cute. Thanks for reading!

[indyhat]

Awesome! And funny, kinda ... ;)

[lotus0kid]

Thanks!