Comments | remixthedrabble: Firefly: Should Fall Apart (The End Is The Beginning Is The End Remix)

remixabot in remixthedrabble

Jun 05, 2009 22:42

Original Fic: Should Fall Apart, by trialia
Remix: Should Fall Apart (The End Is The Beginning Is The End Remix) [Mal/Inara, 100 Words, Rated PG-13] by amathela

( Should Fall Apart (The End Is The Beginning Is The End Remix), for trialia )

Comments 8

exeterlinden June 14 2009, 18:43:40 UTC

Ouch, what a (deliciously) cruel ending. I really liked this - really liked the description of Mal's kiss being undemanding.

amathela June 23 2009, 01:00:17 UTC

Thank you!

luzula June 14 2009, 18:52:59 UTC

Wow. Way to turn it around at the end.

amathela June 23 2009, 01:00:47 UTC

Thanks :)

trialia June 15 2009, 17:12:15 UTC

Thank you very much - I love this take. Very true to the feel of the original without being the same. ♥

amathela June 23 2009, 01:01:05 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

keerawa June 17 2009, 05:50:28 UTC

I like the contrast between imagination and reality. The ending hurts.

amathela June 23 2009, 01:01:26 UTC

Thank you!