Miracles/Supernatural: Succulent (The Orchard of Dreams Remix)

[remixabot]

Original Fic: Orange-Flavored Kiss, by sailorhathor
Remix: Succulent (The Orchard of Dreams Remix) [Paul/Dean, 114 Words, Rated PG-13], by melodyunity

Comments

[emmademarais]

YES! /dies laughing/

We BOTH remixed the same fic!

OFK has always been my favorite of Laurel's, but this? Rocks! I couldn't bring myself to do a Paul POV so I'm thrilled you did. As soon as I got the list in my inbox of who my alternate remixes were I thought of this one and told myself I should look at the others (which I did) but I kept coming back to this one. Something so compelling about the visual - the FLAVOR - that this brings up. It's irresistible.

I love the idea that Paul wakes tasting oranges. That's awesome. Well done!

[melodyunity]

LOL! I know, right?

I've always loved "Orange Flavored Kiss" too -- it's such a strong, vivid image, so wonderfully sensual -- the color, the texture, the flavor and scent, the taste of the orange...it really appeals to all five senses, a perfect choice for a PWP. I just couldn't resist.

I love the idea that Paul wakes tasting oranges. That's awesome. Well done!

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[sailorhathor]

Wha, two people got matched with me? I'm a lucky girl!

I like that this is from Paul's POV. I like that Dean says, "Sweet," which reminds me of Paul's line from "The Ferguson Syndrome" in reference to the apricots. It's like this is what it would be like if they had the same dream at the same time that night.

Can I archive on CTB? I'm working on getting a few different stories written by others up.

[melodyunity]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked this!

It's like this is what it would be like if they had the same dream at the same time that night.

*blush* What a lovely compliment; that's exactly the effect I was going for.

Can I archive on CTB?

Of course you may!