Comments | reissaidan: Cherry Chapstick : G-TOP

reissaidan

Cherry Chapstick : G-TOP

Apr 04, 2009 19:03

cherry chapstick. fail!title, ignore prz. [nc-17]
[au] g-top.
are you really supposed to be accosted by whores in night clubs? seunghyun ponders the mystery. at least he does somewhere in his head that's not written into this fic. until it turns out to not be what it seems.
i coulda written something sweet, like fluff. i coulda written my forte, ( Read more... )

pairing: seunghyun/jiyong, fandom: big bang

Comments 43

playitdirty April 4 2009, 23:30:56 UTC

WHUT PHAIL. I DO NOT SEE ANY PHAIL HERE ♥

This is freakin' awesome ♥ & your first bb fic being g-top, what's more awesome than THAT XD Ahh, love whore!gd & gullible!top <3. This line wins LOL. "Do I have to, uh. Y'know. Pay you?" Oh, top ♥♥

& I have NO idea why but gd's ex reminds me of... seungri. omg ;A;

I love how it ended, too. You should write more! (preferably with porn? LOL.)

reissaidan April 5 2009, 09:49:18 UTC

NO PHAIL? 38 REALLY?!

I ♥ G-TOP to death, it's the best freaking Big Bang OTP I can ever have. I mean, it just screamed out to me the moment I knew BB! Coffee Prince Parody with GD being a total lovestruck girl & TOP utterly clueless! Haru Haru MV with their aggravated sexual tension & almost freaking kissing! Oh, the undying love of those two dorks made me persevere with writing this fic even though it nearly killed me. Thanks so much for appreciating my work of disaster. <3

BUT HEY. I WAS WRITING GD'S EX BASED ON SEUNGRI, IDEK WHY MYSELF. I EVEN TRIED TO GENERALIZE HIM SO THAT IT DIDN'T LOOK LIKE IT WAS RI. SO WOW, YOU'RE PRETTY SMART TO NOTICE THAT! |D Erhm, excuse the capslock, 'tis my native language xD

Oh, I will, no worries. Porn shall be imminent in my future writing. 8D! Again, thanks so much for the comment! ♥

playitdirty April 5 2009, 11:43:15 UTC

LOL. Maybe it's because I can really, REALLY imagine Ri saying that XD probably because of his strong baby mv/performance and all that XD. "let's make love tonight" -dies-

reissaidan April 5 2009, 12:31:28 UTC

ROFL. TRUE. Oh Baby, why so fierce. |D

yourmyfantasy April 5 2009, 01:04:48 UTC

THERES NOOO PHAILLLLLLLL!!!
OMGOSH, YOUR FIC ROCKSSSSS.<333333
seunghyun!!!! ahhhhh!!!! *goes crazy* *Screams*
He was soooooo sweeeeet in this <3
and awww jiyong!!!!!!!!!
love your fic!!!!!

reissaidan April 5 2009, 09:51:12 UTC

AHH, REALLY?! I FIND THE LACK OF PHAIL DISCOVERED MIND-BOGGLING! D8
But aiiee, thanks so much for appreciating this disastrous piece & commenting anyway! ♥

peaxhie April 5 2009, 02:51:50 UTC

*shrieks* this is so totally awesome-tastic
gawd - I desperately need more GTop in my life

reissaidan April 5 2009, 09:51:59 UTC

Thanks so much for commenting! ♥
Yes. Yes you do. SHIP THE G-TOP FOREVAHHHH~! xDD

mugimugul April 5 2009, 04:38:54 UTC

heh it was a really awesome fic!!!!!

reissaidan April 5 2009, 09:52:39 UTC

Haha, thanks so much for commenting! ♥

mugimugul April 6 2009, 05:46:49 UTC

=] well thx for writing~~!!

jemnise April 5 2009, 08:34:40 UTC

"Jiyong. Will you let me love you?" he asks softly.

Jiyong bites his lower lip, the tears in his eyes no longer bitter or hurt, and he smiles. "Yeah. I guess so."

*flails**screams*

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. ISN'T THIS FUCKING AWESOME? like seriously AWESOME? ohehmgee. I was browsing bbfanfic in search of some good reads [and yes i read gri ones] and boy am i glad that i clicked to this one XD holy mother. seriously. from the scene in the club, i thought this would be just you know, GTOP smut that will make me go loco. But SeungHyun and his being nosy lead to something fucking awesome like having Ji. OHH MENG. and yes, i second that i thought Ji's ex is Ri -______- WAAAAA. thanks thanks thanks for this one.

oh and yea, the smut scene... *dies*

reissaidan April 5 2009, 09:59:36 UTC

OMGAH IT'S YOU. OMG OMG OMG. UHM. I LOVE YOUR FICS. O_O I, uh, know I don't comment on them but I SWEAR I HAD NO TIME, I USUALLY JUST READ THROUGH PEOPLE'S WORK BECAUSE I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR COMMENTING. BUT I REALLY DO LOVE THEM, YOU'RE ALWAYS UPDATING g_top & FIXING MY, ER, FIX. 8D!

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS FIC. I know, the transition from the club scene to Seunghyun's nosiness was kinda weird ain't it? >.< But hell, it's cuz I'm a sucker for angsty fluff...ish love, sue me. xD
*GASP* YOU'RE ANOTHER ONE. How come it's so obvious Ji's ex is Seungri?! AHH I DON'T WANT MAKNAE TO LOOK LIKE A HEARTLESS JERK. D8

Thanks so much for appreciating this disastrous fail & commenting on it! ♥

Aiiee was the smut scene okay? DDD8