We're Brothers--KHR Fanfic
Title: We're Brothers
Author/Artist: Reidluver
Rating: PG
Warnings: Some blood and language
Prompt: VI- 34. Ryohei, Gokudera - console; "not even the sun can shine brightly all the time"
Word Count: 2,496
Summary: There is more to the Vongola Sun Guardian than his extreme enthusiasm and thickheaded skull. He cares deeply for those he loves, and when ( Read more... )
Author/Artist: Reidluver
Rating: PG
Warnings: Some blood and language
Prompt: VI- 34. Ryohei, Gokudera - console; "not even the sun can shine brightly all the time"
Word Count: 2,496
Summary: There is more to the Vongola Sun Guardian than his extreme enthusiasm and thickheaded skull. He cares deeply for those he loves, and when ( Read more... )
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Um, because I'm weird and am pretty sure I have some form of OCD, I'll pop a basic review in the KHRfest submission, but I agree with rainbowfishes. I loved this.
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Anyway, I enjoyed the way you wrote Gokudera. On the one hand, you keep that hotheadedness and trouble connecting to others as part of his character, which show him as Gokudera. On the other, you have him take authority on the battlefield, making sensible decisions, and he reaches out to those who need it; showing how he's matured. Do I even have to ask if this is TYL!verse?
Same with Ryohei. He's violent, he's edgy, and his thought process is straightforward-yet he also understands logic, and is able to control himself now enough where he can heal his sister as bullets are flying around them AND listen to an order from Gokudera. Again, you've kept him IC while showing how he's matured.
(Have I mentioned yet how much I loved Gokudera giving out an order? Storms truly are the pinnacle of the Sky's power...)
Very well done. Thanks for writing.
What's this? Something blatantly gen? Oh, gotta go write some really obvious, borderline sexual shippy stories ( ... )
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Thank you so much! I'm glad they were IC and that he's matured. So nice to know that you are one of those lucky few who understands that a person can be IC despite maturing. And...it's more 5YL!verse but the basic idea is the same. :)
Heh, I like him giving orders as well. I like having the Guardians issue orders. Dunno why. Thank you so much!
*smirk* Blatanly gen? It's pretty much what I write. I'm not really good at writing romance. I save that for people like you. XD
I'm dying to read your stories!!
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Heehee--of course! I had so much fun writing that part. I had this huge grin on my face while writing it. Thank you so much!
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Back to the fic. OMG!! This is one of the best stories I've read this week! ♥
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