CROWS are bad?

[regionalradical]

HEY, somebody should beta this for me...o' please?
i don't plan on posting this in ze horiffic community.
but ohwellz.

Faris’ hands became numb and stiff, his fingers practically petrified from the extremely cold weather. Could it be worse? He thinks, and his eyes drift outside through an open window.
    The sky is completely dark, even at eight

Comments

[sexy_schnitzel]

Nothing wrong with it! Only perhaps Faris' thoughts could be in italics?

Bill Bartmann

[anonymous]

Excellent site, keep up the good work

Re: Bill Bartmann

[regionalradical]

oh jeez, i wrote that so long ago

who are you anyway?