Is Fate Always This Cruel?

[rednochan]

Pairing : Kyusung, Yewon, Slight!Kisung
Genre : drama, romance
Rating : PG-13
warning : un-betaed
Summary : why the fate is so cruel to him? Did he do something wrong? He only wanted to be with him, to have him, to claim him as his.
A/N notes : the italic words is 'Kyuhyun's thought"

They were childhood friend. Kyuhyun and Yesung. They were best

Comments

[phoenix_soar]

KYU NOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~ DON'T GIVE UP T_T
Oh the ending is heartbreaking. Poor Kyu ... Oh Yesung, you oblivious idiot, why you no love Kyu??? xC

Anyway, for your first fic, I think it's pretty good. ^^ I noticed some grammar mistakes here and there, but overall, it was fine. Keep writing! ^^

And thanks for sharing this fic :D

[rednochan]

i'm sorry for making Kyu like this...
don't mad at yesung, plz~ >_<

thank you~ i know, i'm still bad at this. english is not my native language so i'm really sorry *bow*
then, would u be my beta if i write another fic later? *puppy eyes* i'd be so happy if u loved to...

you're welcome!
thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[phoenix_soar]

Hehe, honestly, I don't think I can ever really get mad at Yesung. Kim Jongwoon is my top bias in SuJu xD (Tied with Hyukjae...)

ANYWAY, thanks for asking me to beta read your fics, I'm very flattered. ^v^ However, I'm pretty busy with my university work, so I might not always have the time to do it. I don't want to cause problems for you... so I'm not sure if it would be OK for me to accept ...

[rednochan]

Yesungie is such a cutie pie, who can be mad at him? =3

it's ok ^^ university tasks sometimes b*tchy, i know. :p if u are busy then u don't have to.. i'm sorry if causing u a problem *bow*
uhm... maybe i should try to find a community that can gives us a beta-er. is there any of it?

[dory_chan]

This story is so sad... *sniff*
Kyuhyun don't give up. Yesung just like Siwon, don't love him. And Yesung might don't recognize that he loves you.
You're a great write. Hope to see more fanfics of your

[rednochan]

i'm sorry, don't cry... *hands tissue*
yes, Kyu still has lots of chance. he just need our support ^^

no, i'm not, believe me :D
yes, i'm still struggling with my chaptered fic in here. wish me to have great ideas so i can finish this soon

thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[cloud_alones]

poor kyuhyun....
yesung too dense to sense kyuhyun's feeling...

please make another yewon fic!!
I love yewon!!!!

[rednochan]

yes, poor kyuhyunnie...

i dunno, but i'll try to. i'm planning in making chaptered fic and it got yewon in it.
me too, they r cute together ^^

[rednochan]

oh, btw, thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[deemonic]

Oh my friggin gosh Yeungie!!!! Why you be so dense!!! -resorts to nonsense English- -smacks Yesung with something- -saves Kyuhyun from driving off a cliff just in time- -kills Siwon-... no wait, erase that last one. Siwon can live, I guess.

Lol, why is KyuSung always so tragic?! Stupid boys... -glomps them-

[rednochan]

no~ don't smack yesungie!he just being dense that's all *my bias shown off keke* i didn't say kyu driving off from a cliff, maybe he just needs to go home in a hurry :p
then maybe we should try to write a happy-fluffy kyusung ^^

anyway, thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[deemonic]

Kyu is alive?! Pheewww... no, wait. You just left it open, depending on how tragic the readers want this fic to be!

Well... yeah - my bias shown too... = these two are pretty much my biases... so I ship them, even though all the fics about them are so emo -tear-

...yup - happy, fluffy Kyusung <3 I need that.

[rednochan]

actually im thinking bout making the sequel
so if u want kyu die then i'll make sure he is XD
there's a reader that wants me to write yewon
so i get lil' confused, whether i should make it ended as yewon or kyusung...

u want fluffy kyusung? rhennie just posted yesterday
its so cute that will makes u get toothache...

[evilmind28]

NOOO...kyu! Don't do that,please...*crying hard*
Oh god..this too much,i can't stand this anymore *runs to the bathroom*.

Poor baby kyu,how fate playing him.
And yesung? Oh i can't believe that he's so dense or too stupid to know kyu' feeling.

It's really nice to find this fic. It already midnight in indonesia n i couldn't sleep...so thank alot for sharing hehehe...
Since this's ur 1st fic,i wanna say FIGHTING..!!!

[rednochan]

i'm sorry for made u cry... *hands tissue*

so u are also from indonesia? hi there~ *waves*
you're welcome... don't stay awake at night, it's not good for ur body ^^

thanks for reading and commenting ^^