Fic: A Hitch in the Plan

[saylee]

Fic: A Hitch in the Plan

Comments

[veronica_rich]

I'll bookmark and I promise to come back and read it when I'm done with a similar story, but I don't want to inadvertently take anything from you by reading this first - but the first few paragraphs look good! :-)

[saylee]

Thank you! I'm looking forward to reading your story - I always love your writing.

[veronica_rich]

OK, now I've finished mine and could read it. All the little details are so fun! I like how it's so human and normal and humorous, and the bit where Cat and Kryten scramble to witness on Lister's side made me laugh out loud because I could see them doing it. Good first kiss, too - those are important to get just right, and I'd say they DID.

[saylee]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I really wanted to include Cat and Kryten, because I feel like I've been neglecting them lately. I'm really happy the kiss worked.

[bayliss]

EXCELLENT! :-)

[saylee]

Thank you! And thanks again for being so helpful.

[bayliss]

Anytime. :-)

[janamelie]

Oh, this is lovely. Fluffy, sexy and adorable. :D

[saylee]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[bayliss]

EXCELLENT! :-)

[janamelie]

You thought it was so good you needed to praise it twice. ;)

[bayliss]

... Oh dear... LJ re-posted the comment. It must have happened when I refreshed the page.

[notalwaysweak]

GUH! *fans self* That was adorable and hot all at once!

[saylee]

Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it!