FIC: What Genma Wanted Ch10 Pt2 (Pockyverse)

[realnobiki]

Title: What Genma Wanted Ch10 Pt2
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: GenRai + Iruka; guest appearances by Neji, Mizuki, Kotetsu/Izumo (for kattmad), OC ANBU boys, and random filler OCs
Genre: From Crack is born Romance, Angst and some other stuff
Rating: Mostly R, veering into NC17 on occasion
Warnings: Language, innuendo, some sex
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto

Comments

[realnobiki]

iruka/izumo had me giggling, because the kissy hands thing is just so juvenile, and kids still do that (sigh). i'm not even sure why they're in this fic, they just kind of showed up. they're not gonna hang around, though (unlike certain anbu boys...)

just started on pt3 - wtf? plot! there's plot! it started here, and will continue on into next chap. but very little smex - there just isn't time, and without genma, i'm becoming ambivalent. because, well, you'll find out next chap... *grin grin grin*

[kattmad]

Ohhh reallly...don't really know WHY they showed up here... YAY ...FAN SERVICE, for adoring fans. I know you just wanted to hear Izumo speak sexy and see Iruka play naughty sensi ~.o

[drelfina]

Mizuki is an evil bastard. STILL.

I bet he's plotting omething. And he's... yeah. His characterisation is good. You can see that there's some creepy stuff going on ...

And woah. Izumo and Iruka! Just. So. Cute.

And Ko's a spoilt brat and Iruka's just cute and so commanding and all...

Just. Cute...

On an offnote, my supervisor said my presentation was good!

:)

[realnobiki]

funny you should mention Iruka and 'commanding' - i'm midway through next part, and Iruka just went off on one of the ANBU boys. *heh heh*

HOORAY FOR YOU!!! sorry i don't have any pron to reward you for your hard work. maybe soon - there won't be anymore in this fic for a while, sadly. and i'm still struggling with the setting of the jiraiya fic. hmmm, perhaps a prequel thingy? wouldn't be iruka, though, and i know you just loooove iruka... (who doesn't?)

oh, hey, looky looky, new guy icon i found in my laptop. wish i'd known i had it around when i did guy-fic.

[drelfina]

Yay!

only boo, no porn.

:(

But there will be more Iruka-fic, yes? I don't mind Iruka-fic.

Oor Izumo. Or Kotetsu.

Or Gen.

>.>
<.<
o.o

:)

Cactus.

hee.