Inheritance, V & VI

[rchevalier]

More of Inheritance (for Linwen.) I think I'm going to divide this into two more posts: one on Friday for the next two sections, and then Sundayish for the last (which is the longest by far, 4K and I'm going to need to add stuff once I get there since I've been making a list of all the things I have to settle and there's quite a few I didn't settle

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[linwenilid]

Missy and Izzy? They're blood relatives!! Or am I missing something? And poor, poor Butler, such accusations are so unfair... I might kill you now. :P

Excellent. Thanks, again, and keep it up!

[rchevalier]

Missy and Izzy? They're blood relatives!!
Yep. :P (I get into it later. If that's any consolation. (Incest is weeeeeeeeeird to write.))

Thanks. :)

[fairyhunter]

Confusion:

Er, whatever happened to Missy's child? Was she named Rhododendron? Why wasn't Missy's baby mentioned at all after the MissY Scarlet chapter? WHUT? *is probably being thick*

And who did Juliet sleep with? Arty, or Izzy, or both? *is definitely being thick now*

Concrit:

"When she finally come down, in retrospect their reaction might have been a bit extreme." come => came, and there's something else that's funky about this sentence, but I am too tired to be able to fix it

LOL:

"'You always offered caviar. Don’t give me that look, you know you only eat it because it’s expensive.'"

"Social dilemmas had always confused him. He had never been able to make sense of them, even with calculus, and calculus solved everything."

[rchevalier]

Er, whatever happened to Missy's child? Was she named Rhododendron? Why wasn't Missy's baby mentioned at all after the MissY Scarlet chapter?
Um, later. Gah. I wish I could post it all at once without feeling bad about it being ages from now. I kinda-sorta tie stuff together? Try to? Maybe? This story confuses me too. Though, I probably should mention her *somewhere* before IX, you're right. :P

"When she finally come down, in retrospect their reaction might have been a bit extreme." come => came, and there's something else that's funky about this sentence, but I am too tired to be able to fix it
Yeah, I see it. *headdesk* That's what I get for editing fast. Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. *puts on list of things to fix*

Thanks, though! Ha, this is what I get for reading mah Terry Pratchett: I can wing it at humor. (Not anything like him of course, it's sorta like getting a few molecules of paint from standing near a Monet.)

[thesurvivalist]

YAAAY

OMG LOLITA SKIRT.

EVEN THOUGH IT'S NOT A LOLITA OUTFIT, IT'S STILL COOL.

WELL, MAYBE IT COULD COUNT AS PUNK LOLITA.

[rchevalier]

AIE! But Aimee told me that the black frilly skirts were a type of Lolita when I was editing that at lunch! *cries*

Well, yours is a sort of Lolita later on. Frilly and pink. XD I've got that one right at least. (Dammit, I still need to send you the last one, don't I? Do you have time to pick a bit before I get to editing it?)

[thesurvivalist]

Lolita is complicated.

Gothic Lolita (which you're probably thinking of) is generally black and white. (Kuro Lolita is purely black). But they're both very frilly, girly fashions despite this. Nothing too scary, generally.

I'm thinking punk lolita in this case. You generally have a few cute features (like a frilly skirt) but the rest is all punk.

Lolita fashion gets confusing.

[rchevalier]

*is very confused* Aimee I think was talking about the history of it. I was sorta tuning her out (:P) but I got the impression that any that were modelled after little girl skirts and trying to look innocent and childlike and cute and stuff were Lolita. Um?

I don't think the labels matter.

*hides from frillyness*