If We Have Waited in the Darkness

[ratherastory]

Title: If We Have Waited in the Darkness (This Never Happened, Part I)
Summary: Written partly for spn_30snapshots and partly for animotus, who reminded me that I had yet to write future!Dean and further requested a shoulder injury. So I killed two birds with one stone, as it were.
Prompt: #18 "Sunrise"
Warnings: A bit of swearing.
Spoilers: Up to 5.04. There are

Comments

[melanth0]

augh.

the whole situation is just so desolate. ;_;

I really like what you've done with Dean and Cas, how they're on the road to being their The End selves but not there quite yet.

[ratherastory]

It is pretty desolate. :(

Glad you liked it, though.

[animotus]

You're damn fast bb!O.O
I don't why I love busted shoulders on Dean,not on everyone else!I swear!
It must be because I find shoulders injuries kind of intimate,they make Dean look more vulnerable!
Thank you love,I really liked this!

[ratherastory]

1,000 words is relatively easy to knock out, although I can never guarantee the quality. *cough*

Busted shoulders are all to the good, and I can see why you like them. It's the way it makes him hunch over on himself, right? ;)

You're welcome!

[animotus]

I disagree,your quality is always guaranteed bb!Maybe you don't know...but I do!I'm an expert,a professional fanfics reader!*is arrogant*
Yeees,the way he moves all pained and beautiful and very Dean Winchester!*g*

[pkwench]

I love this. It's such a bleak, hopeless little slice of life. I'm also always so pleased when you write in Cas's POV.

[ratherastory]

Umm, I'm glad you liked my bleak, hopeless little slice of life? ;)

[roque_clasique]

This was lovely and bleak and I think you did a great job keeping it short and sweet. Well, not quite sweet, but - yeah. Great Cas voice too. &hearts

[ratherastory]

Thank you!

I always worry about my Cas voice, much more than anyone else...

[borgmama1of5]

Wow. Sad. Evocative, effective use of words.

[ratherastory]

Thank you! Word choice was extra-important in this, since it was so short. :)