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Subspecies: Bloodpact -- Chapter Six

Jan 28, 2008 18:14

Sorry to anyone who caught the HTML goofiness; these things are pretty hard to keep under the post character limit. :)

Subspecies: Bloodpact
Chapter 6/8
Author: memoriamvictusRating: R ( Read more... )

bloodpact, memoriamvictus, fanfic

Comments 22

jaborwhalky January 29 2008, 08:59:05 UTC

Ya..this should have been the 4th film

I even like Mel in this..

keep going..

memoriamvictus January 29 2008, 19:54:34 UTC

I'm glad I could bring you around on Mel. :) There's plenty of excitement yet to happen!

Taking a break from scanning to type.. smiller03_9 January 29 2008, 10:03:01 UTC

I read this last night and I had to give myself several hours to compose everything I want to say or there would be tons of posts from me here ( ... )

Re: Taking a break from scanning to type.. memoriamvictus January 29 2008, 20:00:01 UTC

Oh, good. I haven't had a chance to read the second one yet, but I'm glad to know the third's coming; the scripts are really neat.

I'm pleased you enjoyed this one so much! I felt a little guilty lifting that scene so nearly intact from the film, but as it was one of the few flashes of brilliance in the movie, it seemed a shame to let it go. I always thought Radu's reaction in the film was more due to overweening arrogance than anything else... but as he's gotten a bit of a reality check in this story, he was quite a bit crankier. And Mel... well, Radu doesn't strike me as the type who's had a lot of experience in asking people for favors, so he tried his best. :) As for the rest of your thoughts... I fear my answers would tend to incriminate me, so I shall have to refrain from doing so. Thanks for commenting!

Re: Taking a break from scanning to type.. smiller03_9 January 30 2008, 01:32:56 UTC

I just have a quick question..

When Radu and Michelle go off to hunt together at the end of part 4, is there a time break between that and when Michelle meets Rebecca in the alley? Or is it that they just went out and ran into each other that night.

Re: Taking a break from scanning to type.. memoriamvictus January 30 2008, 03:36:10 UTC

It's the same night; they lucked out. :) The story begins three or four days after the end of Bloodlust, but aside from that, everything happens in sequence save for this chapter, where there's a bit of overlap.

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morelinde December 29 2008, 10:51:24 UTC

ummm... i love you? and your writing?