A Sunday Rosebud

Aug 22, 2010 17:58


Written for ba_rosebuds 
Prompt: Chains
Setting: Wishverse

He no longer felt the cold steel of the manacles around his wrists. He no longer felt the sting of the holy water, or red, hot pain of the matches.  He had ceased to wonder how or why things had turned out this way, why she never showed up, why he had failed.

He had concluded long ago ( Read more... )

ba_rosebuds, buffy/angel, ficlet

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devotedbangel August 22 2010, 22:45:51 UTC
Beautiful. :)

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racheltng August 23 2010, 05:08:17 UTC
Thank you!

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ares132006 August 23 2010, 06:17:25 UTC
Lovely use of the prompt.

I see you used the Wishverse for your stage.

Had he really been naïve enough to think that he, the most loathsome of creatures, had been chosen for a special destiny?

Oh yes. That Angel (and ours) would never think to presume that there was any other fate for him.

Well done.

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racheltng August 23 2010, 15:23:37 UTC
Thanks. Angel's always been waiting for the other shoe to drop.

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librarian2003 August 23 2010, 08:26:49 UTC
Yes, that's our Angel...

Lovely little rosebud!

Jo

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racheltng August 23 2010, 15:23:56 UTC
Thank you!

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scribesds August 25 2010, 21:07:15 UTC
Poor Angel! Love where the prompt took you for this rosebud.

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racheltng August 26 2010, 02:54:58 UTC
Yeah, my mind first went elsewhere with "chains," but this came out instead. Glad you liked it.

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perpetual August 26 2010, 13:23:06 UTC
They're hazel. :) (Or greenish. Matter of opinion.)

Love the rosebud-- tortured, guilty, and hopeless, that's Angel at his finest.

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racheltng August 28 2010, 15:08:09 UTC
Angel's really Angel when he's suffering. Thanks.

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