Comments | rabenhorst: RE fiction dump

rabenhorst

RE fiction dump

Sep 06, 2011 15:36

Author: fonulyn
Disclaimer: I own no one, only my dirty imagination.

Why don’t you look at me instead | PG13 | Chris/Leon | 571 words
Chris hated watching Leon like this, dark and moody, brooding over something he could not talk about.
Dedicated to ravanna, like all the RE fic I write :) An old request of hers.

( Distraction. )

pairing: chris/leon, rating: r, request, pairing: leon/ada, author: fonulyn, rating: pg13, type: drabbles

Comments 11

pi_ankh September 6 2011, 16:40:55 UTC

Wow! I'm not sure if I can come up anything more coherent :D
This really feels like the thing Leon and Ada have between each other. It's there, but it isn't.
And I so can imagine the situation. What they are wearing and how they move... *sigh*
Yes, I like a lot!

fonulyn September 8 2011, 15:53:10 UTC

It's kind of really sad XD They obviously are tied together somehow but then they never really get their happy ending... :( And I am so happy to hear you like it! :D Thank you!

pi_ankh September 8 2011, 18:56:18 UTC

It is! But then again there's something so erotic in it x)
The pleasure was all mine! :D

ravanna September 6 2011, 16:46:29 UTC

OH MY GOSH I AM SO SO LOOKING FORWARD REAING THESE TOMORROW!! *__* thank you so, so much for sharing this pairing with me and loving it as much as i do ♥ thank you. Oh my go ♥ There will be feedback sooooooooooooooooooon!!

fonulyn September 8 2011, 15:56:23 UTC

I saw your comment and I'll reply to it properly but thank youuuuu for being there ♥ or for being here with me in the fandom :)

spacefragments September 6 2011, 18:31:23 UTC

i especially like the last one! it strikes me as a very chris thing to do, checking on and looking out for the people he loves. :D

fonulyn September 8 2011, 15:53:57 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like :D And that you agree with the characterization ;)

ravanna September 8 2011, 05:17:07 UTC

♥ oh Kätzchen, I so adore you for these. I love the mood you always put them in; the way I find it completely in character whatever they say and whatever they DO; it always feels like being ripped out of the RE universe, though these boys didn’t even meet the great way I’d like them to *laughs*
Stop killing yourself is my favourite (well, from the new ones. Somehow, meet me in the rain still brightens my heart like woah; it’s so simple yet absolutely fascinating and bittersweet). I absolutely can see them acting this way, talking to each other this way, looking at each other this way; Chris as the part needing to make a step forward is very, very realistic, too; as much as I love and credit Leon, I think he simply wouldn’t - dare? Wouldn’t make that one step at least. And awww, how you’ve written their kiss ♥ I LOVED the writing of the whole thing, but the view on how they kissed was love. Oh my ( ... )

fonulyn September 8 2011, 16:04:07 UTC

I love and adore you for always being so enthusiastic about these with me and for leaving me such nice and long and super-sweet comments~ ♥♥♥ And I am SO GLAD that you feel like they're in character! I'm not muchly familiar with Chris, even, and I feel a little cautious to handle him. I have my own version of him, kind of, and I hope it's close enough to the truth XD

Aw and no, thank you so much! I'm smiling so much now :D And it was soo nice to write them again, even if so shortly. I missed them. And hey, when will you write something again? :3 *pokes*

ravanna September 9 2011, 16:51:56 UTC

You're so very welcome; I'm always more than happy to see something by you concerning this pairing ♥

and I'd write you anything you want - any moment you wanna rea about? Any interesting scene in your mind? ♥

fonulyn September 14 2011, 19:06:14 UTC

Oh I'd love something, I just don't know what~ there are so many moments that get me so curious. Hmmh. Anything to do with how their relationship develops, how it changes and deepens? I can try to find a prompt or something, too, if you want :)

And I love your icon! :D