[KH] - Equal & Opposite Reactions (Part III)

[quakewithfear]

            The usually-aggravating confusion of Betwixt and Between provided a welcome haven to Vexen.  He leaned heavily against a wall, trying desperately to collect his thoughts.  Everything that had just happened continued to make his mind reel.  What was there to do now?

About ten feet away stood Xigbar.  Unlike Vexen, he was

Comments

[emotionalspazz]

Gwaaaaahhhhh *shudders*

This is original, weird, new, and awesomely GROSS. New take on the whole "Roxas and Sora are one" thing. Poor Axel and Riku... I kind of want to know why Soroxas beat up Riku if they/it were/was looking to him for help.

Can't wait to see more.

[quakewithfear]

Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I'm really really proud of this fic (I guess it's my "baby") so having new people comment and say how much they like it really means a lot!

I meant to address what exactly happened to Riku in the room with the Soroxas, but that will have to wait until the next installment. We'll have to see what happens then!

[quakewithfear]

Hee. I'm glad that I can please, in any case! It makes me happy to hear that people identify with the characters!

All of them are kind of sympathetic... but at the same time very not. I'm so glad to hear your thoughts!

Thank you!

[ryuthehanyou]

*has been made a happy little sadistic gore-monger*

[quakewithfear]

*GRIN* And you've made me a very happy sadistic evil author.

[liadebeaumont]

i am feeling VERY disturbed by this but i could not stop reading *shudders*

[quakewithfear]

Thank you! ^^;; I think!

The point of the story was to be horrifying, so if I've creeped someone out, I feel like I've done my job.

Thank you for reading even though you were disturbed!!

[liadebeaumont]

^^ welcome....

[lostscore]

Mmm. I knew that extra scene was a good idea. Going into your creature's head was exactly the right use of the extra script. there's nothing more frightening than a sympathetic creature or at least one that can make some uninformed choices.

Even better is its "bipolarity". Roxas' acidity combined with Sora's desperation makes for a wonderfully vile critter.

B-E-A-UTIFUL job.

[quakewithfear]

Your comments always make me ungodly happy. I'd update more just to get more of them!

(Plus E&O comments are sort of special. It's like going back to the place where we first met!)

[lostscore]

I know! Goodness....

it's been soooo long.