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Aug 04, 2011 04:01

At Home in The Sea, part 2

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weatherfront August 4 2011, 12:47:37 UTC
Your existence is unfair, you asshole. I hate you so much. Oh my god please just walk into my head and write everything I ever need to read in my life, Em. Jesus fucking Christ. I'm honestly physically incapable of writing a longer comment because I don't even understand how your brain works and where you find the words that you do, and it is so UNFAIR and I don't get it and I want to know how someone does this and why are you going into any career other than this? Pharmacology? Why would you-- ughhhhhhh Em I want to be you

Seriously

I may not be much good at putting the right words in the right places but I'm not bad at finding the wrong ones in the wrong places, and there isn't a single thing out of step here, I don't understand it... if I asked, are you actually human, it would sound facetious, but right now I'm not certain what the obvious answer would be

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pyrimidine August 5 2011, 09:04:43 UTC
IFRIT HOW DID YOU KNOW WHAT FIELD I AM GOING IN TO, I MUST HAVE MENTIONED IT IN PASSING, HOW ARE YOU SO THOUGHTFUL --

Listen, you flatter me beyoooooooond belief. Like, what. What. How are you so nice. I've said that before, but it bears repeating many times. I mean, can you please encourage me in all facets of life, because seriously. BE MY LIFE COACH, OKAY.

I am taking everything to be facetious bc I had such a difficult time writing this story. I am not built for anything over 4k!!! Or anything with substance!!! So I am over the moon that you liked it...if you weren't being facetious, that is...

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bookshop November 1 2011, 17:43:44 UTC

i am replying to courant's comment because i need to piggyback on her incoherence. this is the perfect fic. it may be my new favorite arthur/eames fic, Em, oh, my god. i wish i hadn't held off reading it because i could have been rereading it every day since august. this is the perfect fic in all ways. a perfect backstory. a perfect dynamic. a perfect arthur. a perfect eames. a perfect chemistry of teamwork/oneupmanship and a perfect development of a perfect relationship. i am beside myself. it's like you start to write and everything gets out of the way to let you. this was just seamless, and polished, and perfect. thank you. *__*

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anatsuno August 4 2011, 13:05:08 UTC
*blinks* *blinks* Reading this was a humbling experience.. and gave me too many ~feelings~ to express properly just now, I'm afraid. Awesome. ♥

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pyrimidine August 5 2011, 09:27:38 UTC
~FEELINGS~, YESSSSS. jibrailis and I always refer to it as ~feelings~ because, well -- look at this story, haha. Thank you so much!!

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kaydeefalls August 4 2011, 13:56:37 UTC
I love how stark and real and lived-in this world feels, and how clueless they both are without it ever feeling twee, and just, yes. Really lovely.

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pyrimidine August 5 2011, 09:29:32 UTC
Ahhhhh I'm really glad you said that, actually, because being twee was something I kept thinking about. I enjoy reading stories like that, but I don't think I'd be able to pull it off if I were to try and write that way. Thank you so much for the lovely comment :)

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maurheti August 4 2011, 14:31:24 UTC
You just... I can't... I mean. This. Your words are the most gorgeous words. I love how you say things without spelling them out, how you give us a whole character in, like, three words and some punctuation. It's just. I love this so much. So much.

I need to reread this now. Perhaps more coherency after.

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pyrimidine August 5 2011, 09:30:36 UTC
Dude, this story is SO MANY WORDS compared to what I usually write. I felt a bit lost at sea, not gonna lie. So I'm really glad you liked it, thanks so much ♥

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lemniciate August 4 2011, 14:59:39 UTC

I love you and all of your words *________*

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pyrimidine August 5 2011, 09:30:47 UTC
:DDD ♥ ♥

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