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And the Burden's Mine

Apr 08, 2011 23:19

Title: And the Burden's Mine
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2100
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke is the one who started hurting them.
Summary: Coda to Dead Man's Blood: Dean starts obsessing over that one comment John made about cleaning the Impala. Sam is worried.

So uhm...I'm supposed to be working on my two other claims for the Writing Between the Lines ( Read more... )

oneshot, coda, angst, angst_bingo, dean, hurt/comfort, supernatural, hurting dean is like crack to me, sam

Comments 99

ennyousai April 9 2011, 01:42:03 UTC

Ouch. That...really hurts.

Simply and powerfully done.

purple_carpets April 9 2011, 06:03:05 UTC

Thanks so much :)

guardian_chaos April 9 2011, 08:15:28 UTC

I don't remember if I've read any of your stuff before, but this one makes me think I'm going to be looking for your stuff later, purple_carpets. This had "classic" written ALL OVER IT. You should get recced somewhere for this one, I swear. What a grasp on these characters and their lives! You're great!

This was contemplative and engaging and had so many simply stated (yet profoundly true) insights. I felt for them, and I wanted to keep reading on and on and on and...

Oh, and the ending was lovely! Those parallels! Ah! Do you ever write anything with Castiel in it, by chance? I feel like you could turn his and Dean's currently stormy connection VS. the "profound bond" they used to have into really, really amazing words.

Either way, keep writing, purple_carpets. Just keep writing. :)

purple_carpets April 9 2011, 08:21:46 UTC

Omg, thank you so, so much. *blushes* Do check out my other stuff. I think I have finally managed to post all my finished fic to this journal and I have load of half finished stuff on my laptop/in my head.

I haven't written anything with Castiel in it yet. I do have a Cas icon though, so I guess on some level I want to write about him. I'm fairly sure I will force him to star in one of the 22 bingo fills I have left.

And the Burden's Mine catsintheattic April 9 2011, 10:09:46 UTC

This was incredibly sad. Poor Dean. Now I want to wrap him in a blanket and hug him.

Re: And the Burden's Mine purple_carpets April 9 2011, 18:51:18 UTC

I'm so with you. Then again my reaction to most things is wanting to wrap Dean in a blanket and hug him ;)

tifaching April 9 2011, 19:01:55 UTC

That moment bugged the hell out of me. John was an ass, striking out at Dean when he was really pissed at Sam.

Nicely done!

purple_carpets April 9 2011, 20:36:09 UTC

Lol, I think I'm the only one who doesn't really blame John for lashing out like that. Probably because it's something I do all the time. My problem is that show didn't do anything with it! Seriously, it's such a perfect opoortunity... *kicks show*

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 20:38:53 UTC

Thanks so much *hands you some more Kleenex*

Yeah, sure, go ahead. :)