And the Burden's Mine

Apr 08, 2011 23:19

Title: And the Burden's Mine
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2100
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke is the one who started hurting them.
Summary: Coda to Dead Man's Blood: Dean starts obsessing over that one comment John made about cleaning the Impala. Sam is worried.

So uhm...I'm supposed to be working on my two other claims for the Writing Between the Lines ( Read more... )

oneshot, coda, angst, angst_bingo, dean, hurt/comfort, supernatural, hurting dean is like crack to me, sam

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jennytork April 8 2011, 22:56:46 UTC
My heart is broken.

Poor Dean.

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 05:56:07 UTC
I'm so sorry. *tries to hug you better*

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jennytork April 9 2011, 11:34:27 UTC
*curls into the hug*

*is better*

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si_star_x April 8 2011, 23:34:32 UTC
Okay, so, I have a thing. For Dean. We know that. I also have a thing for the car. Yeah? Yeah. I also have a thing for the idea of Dean bent over that car making it all clean and shiny and pretty. AND I have a thing for Dean drinking. So, you? You have pretty much slayed me with this one. I felt his pain, and that ending was just sheer perfection. I loved this to pieces and want to smoosh it forever.

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 06:00:01 UTC
I'm with you on all of these. Dean. Car. Dean cleaning. Dean drinking. Yup, that's about it.
I was a bit worried about the drinking because S1 Dean actually drinks less than S1 Sam (uhm yes...I may have been keeping score and working on graphs and stuff...) but then I figured he didn't go from social drinker to alcoholic in the blink of an eye so this - drinking his daddy issues away - is where it all started.

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si_star_x April 9 2011, 08:01:04 UTC
Exactly, Daddy issues for sure. I thought it fit in well as it's not like you had him permanently attached to the bottle, just... At 3 AM. I thought this was perfect. SPN needs to give us a carwash scene.

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 08:15:47 UTC
Totally! It can be the season 7 opener. No wait, the S7 opener has to be Alastair coming back and finding Dean all alone in some abandoned storage unit. Hm...the carwash scene can be Dean's therapy afterwards. You hear that, Sera?

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borgmama1of5 April 9 2011, 00:24:53 UTC
Sad.

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 06:00:31 UTC
*nods sadly*

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jesseofthenorth April 9 2011, 01:23:26 UTC
It's like you tookm every shitty thing younger Dean beleived about himself and rolled it into one fic. Nice work, in a completely pain-filled tear-inducing kind of way ;)

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 06:02:03 UTC
*pets poor Dean* and it's not like there are too many good things he believes about himself to write a happy fluffy fic next...

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candycanerica April 9 2011, 01:37:20 UTC
Ouch. Well done.

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purple_carpets April 9 2011, 06:02:32 UTC
Thanks :)

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