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purple_carpets

See My Lonely Mind Explode

Feb 20, 2011 17:40

Title: See My Lonely Mind Explode
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 1100
Disclaimer: Not my boys. Kripke broke them long before I ever got to them.
Summary: After the events of Abandon All Hope, Dean's hellhound issues resuface. Sam is left to deal with his brother's panic attack.

Written for the Dean-focused hurt/comfort comment-fic meme (#4)
1Mio thanks to nwspaprtaxis for ( Read more... )

oneshot, coda, commentfic, angst, hurt/comfort, dean, supernatural, hurting dean is like crack to me, sam

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purple_carpets February 20 2011, 18:55:46 UTC

I'm glad you still like it =)
Really, I'd never in a million years have taken that prompt if you hadn't insisted that I should give it a try.

borgmama1of5 February 20 2011, 19:18:53 UTC

So sad, so desparate...and entirely in keeping with Dean of that time frame. At least you had Sammy there for him. But man, this one hurt!

purple_carpets February 20 2011, 19:34:51 UTC

I don't think I've ever had anyone actually be there for Dean when he's really having problems, so this was a nice change. Maybe I should try it more often.

I'm sorry my fics keep hurting you. What can i say, it's winter, I'm in a generally angsty mood ;)

cannnit February 20 2011, 19:19:21 UTC

I have you on my list as favorite authors. :) I like the way you write Dean. And your Sam is way better than shows.. :)

purple_carpets February 20 2011, 19:36:53 UTC

aaw, thanks so much *blushes*

I love writing Dean. Sam is much more of a challenge. I have huge problems relating to his general mindset. I'm glad you think he's better than the original one. ^^

twigletmoo February 20 2011, 19:25:32 UTC

This is brilliant. I can totally see this happening. You've captured Dean's fear excellently and Sam is so awesomely supportive, I love it!

purple_carpets February 20 2011, 19:38:36 UTC

Thank you. I love supportive!Sam. I never really tried it before this fic, because Dean hurts so pretty all by himself, but I think I'll try and get Sam's support into the mix more often.

kaylennz February 20 2011, 19:25:51 UTC

Very well done. You put us right there in the panic attach with Dean. Loved Sam in this and this last part...

**You want a drink?” he asks, somewhere between incredulous and disapproving.

Dean nods. He can almost taste the sharp amber oblivion on his tongue already. Sam looks unhappy for a second, like he did when he was eleven and lecturing Dean on the vices of marihuana, but then he nods and claps Dean on the shoulder and gets up.**

You should try some more prompts ;)

purple_carpets February 20 2011, 19:41:50 UTC

MORE? I wrote *tries counting but is distracted by screaming cousins* loads for that one meme. I'm in the process of putting them up on my journal.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it =)