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Wardrobe Malfunction

Jan 15, 2009 01:53

Title: Wardrobe Malfunction
Fandom: One Piece
Character/Pairing: Nami/Luffy
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~2850
Notes: Request fic written for xredribbon with the prompt "Luffy/Nami bodyswitch; clothes." Second-ever OP fic! Loosely inspired by mallowmateys canon, but only in a very general way. Just like the last one, don't look for an explanation of why they are ( Read more... )

one piece, one-shot, gift/request, bodyswitch, humor

Comments 11

roseveare January 15 2009, 17:03:12 UTC

This is BRILLIANT and I think I love you! They're so in character! Meep! <3

prpl_pen January 20 2009, 08:12:50 UTC

Thank you for reading!

xredribbon January 15 2009, 18:20:15 UTC

....

♥

prpl_pen January 20 2009, 08:13:25 UTC

Should I take that to mean you liked it?

♥

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prpl_pen January 20 2009, 08:13:47 UTC

Thanks!

danbi January 16 2009, 09:58:54 UTC

This was super cute, Jessie! I liked Nami's realisations of her own reactions to touching Luffy. Thanks for linking it, man. ♥

prpl_pen January 20 2009, 08:15:12 UTC

Thank you~! ♥

lily22 February 9 2009, 03:08:52 UTC

Jessie, I wrote this adorable piece such a long time ago; can't believe it's taken me this long to actually formulate a response. ;_;

Um, what can I say? It's wonderful! I love the tone of this piece - how seriously you treated the (not insignificant!!) challenges posed by this completely cracktastic scenario, how Nami is at once frustrated out of her mind and very pragmatic as she forces Luffy into proper clothing, and the way you describe things is clear and vivid without being florid (despite your very clever comm name :)).

...giving the world (or at least Sanji) a view Nami would have to charge through the nose for.

Needless to say, the breasts on Nami's body have been left out in plain view, exposed and unsupported, but she is completely unconcerned about that--this is Luffy, after all.I'm really amused by Nami's attitude here: for some reason it gives me a feeling of nakama warm fuzzies, like they as a crew are so close that she's not particularly worried about being exposed, just the revenue she's potentially missing out ( ... )

lily22 February 9 2009, 03:09:07 UTC

Uh. Read. Not wrote. >_>

prpl_pen February 14 2009, 10:08:20 UTC

Lily~ ♥

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm still pretty new to One Piece, and even newer to writing for it, so I'm still trying to get a feel for it, but I'm really glad you liked it!