twirling her blind-kid's cane like she was pimp of the place
twirling her blind-kid's cane like she was pimp of the place
twirling her blind-kid's cane like she was pimp of the place
Terezi Pyrope in eleven words imo. I'm actually surprised your first(??) foray into this fandom is about these two, but I gotta admit: there's nothing more fun than writing from Dave Strider's POV and there's nothing more fun than elaborately describing Terezi as a terrifying creature and smooshing them together is even better. I feel dumb because I don't have a whole lot to say except that I loved all of these beautiful similes and metaphors and also this was pretty spot on and I grinned like a moron reading it. ♥ You really tapped into the awkwardness inherent in Dave's coolkid facade and captured something I really love about their dynamic: the way she just sort of waltzes through all his boundaries and comfort zones without really asking permission and he can't really do anything but roll with it.
Also the last line. The last line nghfjhdgjkf
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twirling her blind-kid's cane like she was pimp of the place
twirling her blind-kid's cane like she was pimp of the place
Terezi Pyrope in eleven words imo. I'm actually surprised your first(??) foray into this fandom is about these two, but I gotta admit: there's nothing more fun than writing from Dave Strider's POV and there's nothing more fun than elaborately describing Terezi as a terrifying creature and smooshing them together is even better. I feel dumb because I don't have a whole lot to say except that I loved all of these beautiful similes and metaphors and also this was pretty spot on and I grinned like a moron reading it. ♥ You really tapped into the awkwardness inherent in Dave's coolkid facade and captured something I really love about their dynamic: the way she just sort of waltzes through all his boundaries and comfort zones without really asking permission and he can't really do anything but roll with it.
Also the last line. The last line nghfjhdgjkf ( ... )
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