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Fearless on My Breath . Part III/III . 2 Fast 2 Furious .

Jun 23, 2011 14:42

Title: Fearless on my Breath - Part III/III
Author: pprfaith
Summary: Sequel to The Art of Running. Brian’s never scared and Dom sometimes feels like he’s forgotten how to be anything else. Or: Fear and Loathing in Miami.
Rating: Crunchy, hard R for sex, violence and my potty mouth, which tends to bleed over into the characters.
Pairing: Dom/Brian, ( ( Read more... )

fandom: fast and furious, pairing: dom/brian, series: running!verse, story: fearless on my breath, non-crossover, all the boys are girls, pairing: het

Comments 38

chosenfire28 June 23 2011, 15:44:21 UTC

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!

I made a really undignified noise when I saw you'd wrote a sequel and this is just all around kinds of perfect. I loved how the elements of 2 Fast 2 Furious were worked in and adored Roman's addition to the family. The comparison between Verone and Brian's dad was heartwrenching and I loved how you made Brian care about Monica because she saw herself in her.

This was really amazing and I adore this entire verse!

pprfaith June 24 2011, 10:35:50 UTC

Thanks! Glad you like!

devilishangel03 June 23 2011, 16:44:37 UTC

you are AMAZING! this is beyond words. your writing skill are simply flawless. seriously marry me. lol. i love your characterization of Dom, Rome, and especially Brian as a female. you haven't made her weak, afraid, or less crazy as she was being male. you should write in this 'verse forever and ever. i love Dom calling her a crazy fearless bitch. everything about this is FLAWLESS.

pprfaith June 24 2011, 10:35:19 UTC

Thanks. But, honey, don't you think it's a bit early to be talking about marriage? ;P

devilishangel03 June 24 2011, 15:44:51 UTC

lol. yes, i guess it is =)

chaoticallyclev June 23 2011, 17:10:38 UTC

Love it! Definitely love it. Jeez-- you don't even know what this series does to me. It's frickin' mind blowing how well you make everything work. I just-- I don't even have words for it.
♥♥♥♥♥

pprfaith June 24 2011, 10:34:39 UTC

Thank you.

supercaptain182 June 23 2011, 17:57:50 UTC

Read this right before work and it was glorious. I could spend this entire comment quoting nearly every part of this fic. I love that it's from Dom's POV and all the details that you've thrown in, like Brian's family life, her and Rome, Brian vs. Letty, her sheer craziness...

My goodness, this is fabulous. I'm so happy that you continued with this verse. I love your take on Verone and his relationship with Monica. It was very insightful.

I bow down to you, madam, because this is still amazing!

Btw: Who do you picture as girl!Brian when you write her? I'm curious, because I have my own image of her, but I'm interested in knowing who you used as your inspiration.

pprfaith June 24 2011, 10:34:21 UTC

Why, thank you for those kind words. :) I'm glad you liked it.

As for girl!Brian, I have yet to find someone that really fits. The closest I've found so far is Teresa Palmer, but only when she's not all made up, and that's still kind of... not really it. Or maybe Evan Rachel Wood, before she went redhead. Basically, girl!Brian only exists in my brain.

vesselandpestle June 23 2011, 20:45:22 UTC

Goddamnit. You made me steal a friend's computer so I could get eljay access and read this and then you had to go and make it WORTH IT. *sigh* I loved this. I would also love to see you continue this through all five movies because Fast 5 was FUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

<3
Anna

pprfaith June 24 2011, 10:31:19 UTC

Erm... I'm sorry dear, it won't happen again?

No? Okay then. Thank you!

And hush, we're not telling people I plan on working my way through the movies because that way, if I get flakey about it, no-one will know what a horrible failure I am.

Kisses!

Yes, I actually just said that. I'm high on painkillers. I'm excused.