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Link of the Day: brookolas feels that Cormac McLaggen is going to be the new Cedric, who was the new Oliver.
TITLE: Child of My Enemy
PERPETRATOR: Reds98, but it was actually written by Blueberry Girl on ff.net who seems to have disappeared.
BANNER:This one gets right to business, nothing implied, nothing fancy
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: not described
EYES: "vacant"
MARKINGS: a "tear-stained" face.
POSSESSIONS: Draco's "spawn".
ORIGIN: Voldemort wants and heir, so he gets Draco to rape and impregnate Hermione.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Draco Malfoy rapes her against a willow tree by Hagrid's Hut. She tells Ginny, but doesn't want anyone to know because of the shame. She finds out she is pregnant, and Ginny convinces her to keep the baby. Dumbledore is alerted to her condition and brings her to his office with Draco and tells her that her parents were murdered. She and Draco are eventually going to fall in love, 'cause that's what babies do, ya know?
SPECIAL ABILITIES: OOC-ness.
NOTES: The whole point of the rape is to get Hermione pregnant, which for the sake of the story it worked. But what if it didn't? Would Draco just go after her again? Or did he knew that she was ovulating? He has some sort of special power to detect ovulation? This is an important plot point you know!
SAMPLE:
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Hermione ran to the common room in a hurry searching for a particular red head. She saw Ginny sitting with a bunch of 5th year girls chattering. Hermione walked over quickly, getting quite a few stares considering her rumpled clothing. Ginny and the rest of the girls looked at Hermione curiously. “Ginny could I possibly borrow you for just one second?” Hermione asked plastering on a fake smile once more.
Ginny nodded and sent a smile at her friends before getting up and following Hermione to her room. Once the room was locked and secured with the necessary spells Hermione turned to face her friend, this time with tears in her eyes. "I'm pregnant," She squeaked.
"Are you kidding?" Ginny asked, blinking wide fearful eyes.
Hermione laughed in a crazed sort of way. "No. No I’m not and Ginny I’m about to hurl myself off the astronomy tower any moment now. I can’t handle this. I won’t handle this.”
"No! You try that and I will hurt you. Think about this Hermione, I honestly don't know what you should do but we‘ll get through this." Ginny said trying to convince both of them. “We will get you through this. I promise you okay?”
"Maybe I should kill it," Hermione suggested as if she hadn’t heard a word Ginny had just said.
Ginny frowned. "You can't do that Hermione, like it or not it's yours too. It’s not the child’s fault that it has an asshole for a father and you shouldn’t make it suffer.
Hermione looked at her exasperatedly. She could fathom why Ginny thought this was so easily handled. "Ginny I'm too young to have a baby.”
Ginny thought for a moment trying to come up with some reasonable example that could calm down Hermione. "My mother had Bill when she was 17, and you’ll be having this child at around 17. Bill turned out fine, right?”
"Are you mad?” Hermione asked her feeling tears slip down her cheek. “Your mother was married and had a loving husband. I don’t have either of those and I can’t bring a baby into this mess.” Hermione collapsed to her knees crying heavily. "Don’t you see? I have half of him growing inside of me and I don't want it!"
Ginny got up and wrapped her arms around her shaking friend. She didn’t know what to do in a situation like this so she said the most logical thing she could. "We'll figure something out," Ginny whispered fiercely making a silent vow.
"Gods I hope so.”
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The next morning Hermione woke up and remembered the past day's events; she looked around her disoriented room and got up kicking books out of her way to her open wardrobe. Her cracked mirror stood next to it reflecting her distorted figure as she picked through her hangers. Pulling out her necessary attire she threw it on the bed and ignored her broken reflection even though it was antagonizing her.
On her way through the halls to go down to breakfast, Hermione ran into Dumbledore. "Ms. Granger, I have been looking for you. Please come with me." Dumbledore said his eyes grim. Hermione frowned as she followed him, wondering if he had already heard of her oncoming pregnancy.
They reached the Gargoyle. "Cauldron cake," Dumbledore said and walked in with Hermione following. They walked into his waiting room where Draco was waiting by a portrait of Salazar Slytherin, how appropriate.
They passed Draco and continued into Dumbledore’s office. After he sat down he looked up at Hermione with no twinkle in his blue eyes. "I believe I have some things you need to be aware of. First of all, Madame Pomfrey has informed me of your condition.”
Hermione opened her mouth to comment but he cut her off with a shake of the head and continued. “Second, Ms. Granger, you might want to sit down for this."
Hermione stared at him for a second but continued to stand near the door as if it gave her some kind of comfort. She didn’t know what he could say but she had a feeling it would make her want to start running again.
Dumbledore raised his glasses on his crooked nose before continuing. “I’m sorry Ms. Granger but it has come to my attention that your parents are dead.” He watched her for a reaction.
Hermione’s heart froze in her chest, “H-how?!”
“They were murdered.” The headmaster said gravely.
Hermione backed up into the door as she felt the blood pound in her ears. Mum… Dad… Murdered? She started feeling dizzy as she felt her stomach start revolting against her.
“Ms. Granger?” Dumbledore asked standing up as she started sliding down the door.
Hermione’s eyes rolled up into her head and she collapsed to the floor in a heap.
Link of the Day: brookolas feels that Cormac McLaggen is going to be the new Cedric, who was the new Oliver.
TITLE: Child of My Enemy
PERPETRATOR: Reds98, but it was actually written by Blueberry Girl on ff.net who seems to have disappeared.
BANNER:This one gets right to business, nothing implied, nothing fancy
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: not described
EYES: "vacant"
MARKINGS: a "tear-stained" face.
POSSESSIONS: Draco's "spawn".
ORIGIN: Voldemort wants and heir, so he gets Draco to rape and impregnate Hermione.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Draco Malfoy rapes her against a willow tree by Hagrid's Hut. She tells Ginny, but doesn't want anyone to know because of the shame. She finds out she is pregnant, and Ginny convinces her to keep the baby. Dumbledore is alerted to her condition and brings her to his office with Draco and tells her that her parents were murdered. She and Draco are eventually going to fall in love, 'cause that's what babies do, ya know?
SPECIAL ABILITIES: OOC-ness.
NOTES: The whole point of the rape is to get Hermione pregnant, which for the sake of the story it worked. But what if it didn't? Would Draco just go after her again? Or did he knew that she was ovulating? He has some sort of special power to detect ovulation? This is an important plot point you know!
SAMPLE:
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Hermione ran to the common room in a hurry searching for a particular red head. She saw Ginny sitting with a bunch of 5th year girls chattering. Hermione walked over quickly, getting quite a few stares considering her rumpled clothing. Ginny and the rest of the girls looked at Hermione curiously. “Ginny could I possibly borrow you for just one second?” Hermione asked plastering on a fake smile once more.
Ginny nodded and sent a smile at her friends before getting up and following Hermione to her room. Once the room was locked and secured with the necessary spells Hermione turned to face her friend, this time with tears in her eyes. "I'm pregnant," She squeaked.
"Are you kidding?" Ginny asked, blinking wide fearful eyes.
Hermione laughed in a crazed sort of way. "No. No I’m not and Ginny I’m about to hurl myself off the astronomy tower any moment now. I can’t handle this. I won’t handle this.”
"No! You try that and I will hurt you. Think about this Hermione, I honestly don't know what you should do but we‘ll get through this." Ginny said trying to convince both of them. “We will get you through this. I promise you okay?”
"Maybe I should kill it," Hermione suggested as if she hadn’t heard a word Ginny had just said.
Ginny frowned. "You can't do that Hermione, like it or not it's yours too. It’s not the child’s fault that it has an asshole for a father and you shouldn’t make it suffer.
Hermione looked at her exasperatedly. She could fathom why Ginny thought this was so easily handled. "Ginny I'm too young to have a baby.”
Ginny thought for a moment trying to come up with some reasonable example that could calm down Hermione. "My mother had Bill when she was 17, and you’ll be having this child at around 17. Bill turned out fine, right?”
"Are you mad?” Hermione asked her feeling tears slip down her cheek. “Your mother was married and had a loving husband. I don’t have either of those and I can’t bring a baby into this mess.” Hermione collapsed to her knees crying heavily. "Don’t you see? I have half of him growing inside of me and I don't want it!"
Ginny got up and wrapped her arms around her shaking friend. She didn’t know what to do in a situation like this so she said the most logical thing she could. "We'll figure something out," Ginny whispered fiercely making a silent vow.
"Gods I hope so.”
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The next morning Hermione woke up and remembered the past day's events; she looked around her disoriented room and got up kicking books out of her way to her open wardrobe. Her cracked mirror stood next to it reflecting her distorted figure as she picked through her hangers. Pulling out her necessary attire she threw it on the bed and ignored her broken reflection even though it was antagonizing her.
On her way through the halls to go down to breakfast, Hermione ran into Dumbledore. "Ms. Granger, I have been looking for you. Please come with me." Dumbledore said his eyes grim. Hermione frowned as she followed him, wondering if he had already heard of her oncoming pregnancy.
They reached the Gargoyle. "Cauldron cake," Dumbledore said and walked in with Hermione following. They walked into his waiting room where Draco was waiting by a portrait of Salazar Slytherin, how appropriate.
They passed Draco and continued into Dumbledore’s office. After he sat down he looked up at Hermione with no twinkle in his blue eyes. "I believe I have some things you need to be aware of. First of all, Madame Pomfrey has informed me of your condition.”
Hermione opened her mouth to comment but he cut her off with a shake of the head and continued. “Second, Ms. Granger, you might want to sit down for this."
Hermione stared at him for a second but continued to stand near the door as if it gave her some kind of comfort. She didn’t know what he could say but she had a feeling it would make her want to start running again.
Dumbledore raised his glasses on his crooked nose before continuing. “I’m sorry Ms. Granger but it has come to my attention that your parents are dead.” He watched her for a reaction.
Hermione’s heart froze in her chest, “H-how?!”
“They were murdered.” The headmaster said gravely.
Hermione backed up into the door as she felt the blood pound in her ears. Mum… Dad… Murdered? She started feeling dizzy as she felt her stomach start revolting against her.
“Ms. Granger?” Dumbledore asked standing up as she started sliding down the door.
Hermione’s eyes rolled up into her head and she collapsed to the floor in a heap.