Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 7

Dec 14, 2007 09:41

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you so much for all your help and encouragement with this chapter. You are the best. Thank you also to Keren for your support.

Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 63

rosiet December 14 2007, 15:20:10 UTC
Oh I was glad to see this...I love these two...especially Jack! I adore him flirting with Ennis, and I love that he knows he's doing it but can't stop. I so want them to find somewhere they can get that quality time together they both yearn for. It's so beautiful that they both are falling so heavily for each other...and let the other know it too. sigh...

But I'm a little concerned about Ryan too....hmm...with Cindy openly hostile towards Jack now...could be trouble, Jack will have to be careful around him I think.

oh I can't get enough of this..Thank you Christie!

Reply

poppyhoney_67 December 14 2007, 21:31:39 UTC
Hi Rosie, thanks so much and so glad you are enjoying it. flirting Jack is a joy to write, really, he's adorable. No wonder Ennis can't resist. I know I couldn't. And I definitely know you couldn't. LOL

Thanks for reading.

Reply


kmdlrd December 14 2007, 15:52:11 UTC
Oh this was wonderful, well worth the wait. I just love young love, especially between our boys. Le sigh. Can't wait to see what happens next. This story just flows. The pacing is perfect. Thanks for sharing. - B

Reply

poppyhoney_67 December 14 2007, 21:32:48 UTC
Hi B, thanks for your comment, so glad you liked it and the long wait was worth it. I love young love too, it melts me completely. I just want to do this love justice. Thanks so much for your lovely comments about the story itself, that is very much appreciated. Hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reply


mariez65 December 14 2007, 17:57:48 UTC
This story is so refreshing! Another beautifully written chapter that showcases the progression of their feelings for each other. You do a great job of showing that J&E's differences make them a perfect pair because they balance each other so well. So far, so good with the arrival of the campers - Ryan and Justin are already interesting additions to the story. Looking forward to more. Thanks!

Marie

Reply

poppyhoney_67 December 14 2007, 21:34:15 UTC
Hi Marie, oh I am so glad you like it and find it refreshing. I am trying to make it interesting for the reader, and hopefully the additional characters will keep you reading. J & E do have differences, you are right but they are also similar to in some ways. But it all balances out. Thanks so much for reading.

Reply


tizi17 December 14 2007, 18:07:33 UTC
oh yes, holidays definitely do you some good... ;-)
great chapter, getting deeper and deeper.. and so many roads open..
can't wait to see how it goes!
thank you!

Reply

poppyhoney_67 December 14 2007, 21:35:03 UTC
Hey Fausta, thanks for your comment. Yes, by the time I was back from my trips I was ready to get writing! These boys are definitely getting deeper and deeper. Thanks for reading.

Reply


torry28 December 14 2007, 20:21:33 UTC
Love this story more with each chapter.
Reliving some of my camping adventures, nothing as scrumptious as this but exciting just the same.
I'm sure Ennis and Jack will be a great help to Justin as well as the other boys. Their own childhood being a stepping stone to understanding how to approach troubled teens.
You made my Day.
Thank you.
Torry
Happy Holidays to you and your Family

Reply

poppyhoney_67 December 14 2007, 21:35:55 UTC
Hi Torry. I'm so glad this made your day, as your comments make mine. Justin is definitely in need of a friend, lets see if he allows himself to have one. Thanks for reading.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up