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Suits Fic: Some Nights (It's Because Of The Past), Chp 1

Mar 15, 2013 08:35

Title: Some Nights (It's Because Of The Past), Chapter 1
Rating: M
Category: Donna Paulsen/Harvey Specter.
Spoilers: Season Two, War.
Disclaimer: Owned by others.
Author's Note: Beta gratefulness, as always, to ceruleantides.
Summary: It could be a warning sign, but it's just as likely the champagne.

Part 1: Some Nights (It Was Meant To Be)
Part 2: Some Nights ( Read more... )

fic, suits

Comments 16

anr March 15 2013, 19:52:57 UTC

Ouch! Stunning as usual, but what a punch to follow! Beautiful, bb. :)

phrenitis March 15 2013, 20:49:33 UTC

*hides*

I didn't anticipate it going in this direction originally, but Harvey is just ridiculous and blind, and Donna can't stay in limbo forever, so this came out. Heh. Sorry? *puppy eyes*

Thanks as always for reading and commenting! I promise to find a way to fix what I've done eventually. ;)

muldy March 15 2013, 22:41:27 UTC

I LOVE YOU and I have to run off to do photography for a play, but I'll be back with a real review

phrenitis March 16 2013, 05:57:08 UTC

Heh. You might change your mind once you read it. ;)

But I have delicious plans, mwahaha. THESE TWO IDIOTS, I SWEAR.

bristow1941 March 15 2013, 23:51:44 UTC

Oh, Harvey... you can be willfully blind. And really, asking that question mid-coitus? You did deserve that answer. I hope he doesn't manage to burn through Donna's affection for him by being an utter idiot. Sigh...

Beautifully written, love the characterization, and exactly the type of stripped raw fanfic I was hoping to see after that season finale.

phrenitis March 16 2013, 06:00:48 UTC

Doesn't he just... UGH. For a guy that has known her for 13 years, trusts her and relies on her, he's so bloody slow about understanding feelings. And I could tell the way I kept drawing it out in fic after fic that it needed a curve ball. It has to go wrong so he can see what's right. At least I hope that's what I'm doing. ;)

And thank you!! It always makes me happy when you like the fic. *grins*

bluberrykisses March 16 2013, 00:06:36 UTC

Oh my Christ.

phrenitis March 16 2013, 06:08:22 UTC

BWAH. Omg don't hate me. *CLINGS*

abvj March 18 2013, 15:14:52 UTC

I hate you.

No, really, I kind of love you, but why do you always write such excellent things. It makes the rest of us look bad!

The banter is flawless (per usual), the sex hurts in a visceral way, but I love the conversation before the sex the most. The way she comes to him, unashamed, the way she tells him to get over himself. It's canon, in my opinion. And something I'd been toying with myself because there are a lot of instances this season where I can see them turning to each other, and this is a perfect example.

Love this, in case you couldn't tell.

phrenitis March 19 2013, 05:30:11 UTC

Pfft, your Donna/Harvey fics are a staple in the fandom. And they reduce many, including myself, to utter flail, so making you look bad is impossible. <3

I wasn't sure how people would react to seeing these two go in this direction, but yes - doesn't it just feel necessary somehow? Like, something has to give already. And I love that it could be oh so right but just terribly wrong at the same time. :/

I'm so glad you liked it! I have missed you and we must have more discussions on these two idiots because ALL THE FEELINGS. Also, I would like to take this time to tell you that you also need to post up more pictures of that adorable baby of yours. BECAUSE OMG. That is all.