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[philomel]

Title: Quintessence
Pairing: Jensen/Jared, Jensen/OMCs
Rating: R
Summary: This is what makes him what he is.
Word Count: 3,860
Disclaimer: It’s all made up.
Note: Thank you, raynemaiden, for all your help.
Also at AO3.

Comments

[mdlaw]

The language in this was beautiful. m :)

[philomel]

Thank you so much! :)

[zagzagael]

Wow! That was seriously lush - very full of impact! Your language is thick and so so lovely, heavy and very full of visual feeling! I loved it!

[philomel]

Aw, thank you, hon! :) I'm really glad you liked it!

[locknkey]

I knew this was going to be good, but, bb, you just blow me away. This is glorious and gorgeous. So many stunning lines I'd need to quote the whole thing, like So thirsty, so filled up with hunger, the want presses inside to outside like a reverse emptiness. and this his chest a shipwreck of ribs against which his heart beats out a rapid Morse rhythm.

The tension and wind up and drawn out waiting. It kept me leaning in and on edge the whole time. The part where Jensen struggles with accepting himself - beautiful and ache-filled. The ex-lovers shirt and how it reveals Jensen's vulnerability is genius - the perfect example of show don't tell.

And the last line!!!! *draws hearts around this*

[philomel]

Thank you so, so much! ♥ It makes me happy to know that you liked this, hon. :D

And glad you liked the t-shirt bit--I was really close to cutting that, but couldn't quite hit the delete button. Self-editing is really not my strength. *g*

[a_phoenixdragon]

Yes...YES. THIS.

Thank you...

*HUGS*

[philomel]

Aw, thank YOU! :D

<3

[loveme_likethat]

But when you've already fallen, there's no point in wagering on where you land.

Mmmmm, yes. So gorgeous, this.

[philomel]

Thank you so much! :)