Hell-ish, PG 13, No Pairings.

Jun 23, 2008 20:29

Firstly I apologise if you have posted a BigBang I haven't seen. I am behind and will probably read them all after the event, oh noes. But read them I shall.

The fabulous comm ohnokripkedidnt ran a fic challenge. I saw a prompt there that niggled at me, but could never complete it as prompted. I ended up writing the below, which bears no resemblance to the ( Read more... )

my fic

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cd_lind June 23 2008, 19:59:12 UTC
Hee!

Absolutely hilarious. :D

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pheebs1 June 24 2008, 18:30:08 UTC
Thank you love!

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iamstealthyone June 23 2008, 20:28:03 UTC
Cute fic! Intriguing notion that hell is hellish for demons because it’s too nice. *g*

Favorite lines:

He takes a path right to the center. Someone there will be able to tell him.

Someone there will be forced to tell him.

*pets determined!Sam*

“Of course I’ve heard of you. You can call me Ron by the way.”

*g* I love this, the casual dialogue and then the nickname.

“I don’t get it. This is supposed to be hell. I am…” Sam wishes he’d been able to bring a map. “I am in hell?”

Trust Sam to wish he had a map.

“sipping a pink martini!”

“They don’t serve beer.”

*snickers* Poor Dean, missing his beer. *pets him*

“Heaven would involve more naked people and beer. And my car.

*g*

A smile stretches across his face and meets his eyes. “I’ll pee in the pool?”

Just the kind of juvenile thing I’d expect from him. *snickers*

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weesta June 24 2008, 10:34:27 UTC
"I'll pee in the pool?" had me snickering. Leave it to Dean to "ruin" Hell with a bodily function. *g*

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pheebs1 June 24 2008, 18:32:31 UTC
Hee glad you enjoyed it, cheers lovely!

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pheebs1 June 24 2008, 18:32:11 UTC
Thank you so much for picking out lines that you enjoyed hon! I am glad the casual dialogue worked for you as I had fun with that ;)

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relativity1953 June 23 2008, 20:56:24 UTC
Wow - Hell is hell for demons, so its actually pretty nice. But, if the boys make hell a little less pleasant, the demons will want to stay and people on earth will be safe...

Very trippy.

Also, very funny. Nicely done!

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pheebs1 June 24 2008, 18:32:50 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it, thank you love!

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gimlisgloin June 23 2008, 20:57:50 UTC
Loved it! It's adorable and sweet and funny. =)

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pheebs1 June 24 2008, 18:33:01 UTC
Aw thank you! :)

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pheebs1 June 24 2008, 18:33:20 UTC
Thank you!! :) Much appreciated.

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