It's just the right moment and just the right reasons and just the right story and it's so perfect and fine and lovely! I just adore it so much. (And I want them to find each other again, too! :) )
I am just so happy you liked it, thank you lovely! :) Sorry to be so late replying to your comment! :) Thank you SO much for buying me in Sweet Charity and I hope I was worth it!!
Wow. I haven't read a Peter/Sam fic in a looooong time. Thank you so much for writing it. I love how you wrote the POV comments from Peter like "I feel invisible." or "I might just explode" lol. Awesome story
I don't watch heros, I think I've seen maybe three episodes, but I can clearly feel the weight of the family on Peter reading this. And despite the fact that Sam carries the same weight, your tone and texture for each of them makes it so clear that it's just not the same. I love the connection you built for them and the lines out to the lives they lead. Beautiful work!
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It's just the right moment and just the right reasons and just the right story and it's so perfect and fine and lovely! I just adore it so much. (And I want them to find each other again, too! :) )
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I love how you wrote the POV comments from Peter like "I feel invisible." or "I might just explode"
lol. Awesome story
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Brilliant!
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