Comments | phantisma: Unfinished Business, Part 2 -- Leverage, PG-13

phantisma

Unfinished Business, Part 2 -- Leverage, PG-13

Feb 11, 2009 16:22

Fandom: Leverage
Title: Unfinished Business, Part 2 (first part is hereCharacters/Pairings: Nate, Eliot, Parker, Sophie, mentions of Hardison (sort of Nate/Eliot pre-slash), OFC ( Read more... )

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katbcoll February 12 2009, 04:26:00 UTC

Yes it's good.

Don't kill Eliot. *nods*

I'ma gonna be over there whimpering, kay?

ravensword February 12 2009, 23:49:28 UTC

*pets you*

I promise to make it better next time?

katbcoll February 13 2009, 00:17:53 UTC

Okay. I'll hold you to that promise.

angels3 February 12 2009, 05:26:02 UTC

I swear I want to beat Nate about the head with his scotch bottle damn it!

ravensword February 12 2009, 23:49:45 UTC

Something's gonna have to wake that man up!

elebridith February 12 2009, 08:59:50 UTC

Don't worry about character voices, I think you got them nailed. I could see them all, especially Sophie.
And yup, please don't die, Eliot...

ravensword February 12 2009, 23:50:33 UTC

Thanks! I always worry about Character voices.

honeyjojames February 12 2009, 10:49:30 UTC

GAH! Need more! Now!
That was fantastic, hun! Your character voices are perfect! Can't wait for the next part! Just no killing Eliot, okay?!

ravensword February 12 2009, 23:50:57 UTC

Thanks! More to come eventually, I promise.

dudenin February 14 2009, 23:08:39 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you're writing more of this. I love the slow build and the acknowledged but unspoken thing between them. I love the show, and you write both characters so well. I'll definitely be hoping for more!