Fic: First (Claire/Elle)

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NOTE: I have finished my Chemistry investigation YESSS. 4 days of hardcore labour and I never ever want to hear about rates of reactions...ever again...ever.
And then, as all hard work goes, I got all artsy and inspired (I guess that's what hydrogen peroxide does to you...huh) and I wrote. A smutty smutfic. Mhmm.

So. First times eh? Crapper for some

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

MMmmm! I love it!!! I'd say a lovely Elle and me, whipped cream and spray it over eachother and lick it off slowly, teasingly. I had a gf until last year, where we did that too. So much fun!

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Wow haha okay, overshare much? :)

[luna_whisper]

This was great, I love how you wrote Claire in this. I've always hated the "I don't know what I'm doing cause it's my first time" angle.

This Claire was nervous but not in that cliche first time way.

[pew_pew_pew]

Exactly what I was aiming for! I'm always trying to tackle things from an angle no one else has tried, so thanks for noticing :)

[happywriter06]

Love this! Then again I love all your Claire/Elle stuff. You just write them so well. It's always believable and so intimate.

[pew_pew_pew]

Thank you thank you! *grin* I wish more people would write them in a more 'gentle' way. Sadly, the majority like the fucked up, psychotic versions bahah.

[happywriter06]

I like both versions so I think there should be a balance.

[pew_pew_pew]

Aye aye captain :)

[alexfoster451]

It was nice how you approached their first encounter. I know, for me at least, it is a bit of a trap to always have Elle/Claire smut written freaky and dark and painful. This was a pleasant and welcome change to that. Thank you for sharing!

Probably TMI, but my first time was somewhere in the middle of the hot/awkward scale too. My then girlfriend and I snuck onto the grounds of the high school behind my house to watch a meteor shower and it was like we were the only two people awake in the world. I’d only had four hours of sleep over two days and I remember thinking “Oh my god it is going to happen” followed immediately by “Please don’t let me fall asleep before it does!” In the end though it was a great memory. I still smile every year when that meteor shower rolls around.

I’m sure you are going to get some interesting responses to this post.

~ Alex

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Jesus I got so bored of everyone writing how Elle blows Claire up during sex and then there's like, a lightning storm and it's all masochistic and crazy :O
The first time sounds absolutely amazing, glad you didn't get hit by a meteorite though...that could've been awkward to explain to the parents ha. Have yet to try exhausted sex but I'm sure it's charming :D

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!!!
Ok well, I always like it when you drop by because one: your icon's hot and it makes me miss Veronica Mars, boo. Two: There's 'the line of flattery' and you cross it by about 50 miles each time haha, so thank you, so much :)

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I only just noticed this comment godammit, but argh Vmars was the coolest. I mean, the Veronica-isms were the shizz :)