Ashes to Ashes fic: Neutral Men, part 3

Jun 18, 2010 18:56

Part 3 of Ashes to Ashes fic 'Neutral Men'. Beware finale spoilers for both Ashes *and* Life on Mars!

3: Interlude: Take Heed Lest He Fall )

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redderz June 18 2010, 18:59:54 UTC
I've been waiting for this chapter! XD

So curious as to who the boy is! And I still love Jim. You were good with your promise about kitty!Keats. ;) So adorable.

Is it wrong that I actually quite like the idea of Dan and Jim going back to his place and getting to know one another...? ;) *laughs*

Can't wait for mooooore!

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pet_lunatic June 18 2010, 19:56:37 UTC
:D Thank you! It was a bit later than I intended, RL stepped in in a variety of ways. Next one is already well underway, though :)

Heehee. For some reason all I had stuck in my head those cat macros where somebody's dunked a poor kitty in the sink, lol.

Lol! I can't say my brain hasn't wandered in that direction :D There may have to be a missing scene ;)

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redderz June 18 2010, 21:34:53 UTC
I'd love a missing scene. ;)

I can totally imagine wet kitty Keats. XD I really wanted to gather him up when he was all shivering. :P

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x_arri_x June 18 2010, 20:54:57 UTC
Eeep, so much brilliance!

Love all the little digs between Gene and Jim, and finding out more about Daniel! Like his and Jim's relationship too, interested to see where that'll go.

Looking forward to part four :D

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x_ant June 18 2010, 21:07:25 UTC
I love it! :D

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pet_lunatic June 19 2010, 08:23:03 UTC
Thank you very much!

I'm contemplating a spin-off scene, but this particular fic is staying gen - with a perhaps a sneaky hint of Jim/Alex here and there ;) Very nice avatar, by the way!

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liquorishflame June 19 2010, 17:43:40 UTC
Hah! Quite right, the banter is spot on :) Waiting to see what the future brings, (and what is young Arnie's story?)

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