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Cry With A Smile : A Yaoi Poem

Feb 29, 2008 10:13

Title: Cry With A Smile : A Yaoi Poem
Author: Perverted Priestess 69
Pairing: Aizen/Gin
Rating: G
Warning: D/s Themes, mentions of bloodplay
Summary: Somewhere locked in the back of his mind, well guarded and hidden from all… It is there.

Your smile incenses me

When you give it so freely

To press my madness to your lips

To taste our metallic melody

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a yaoi poem

Comments 4

yawns_widely February 29 2008, 19:00:21 UTC

This is amazing. Very beautiful, insightful and melancholy.

Cry with a smile is a sentiment I share for I too smile when I am terribly upset and often to hide my pain or anger or just plain irritation, so on a less intense level I can relate to this. And for this reason I like to think there is more to Gin than what his smiles communicate. Good job!

Hehehe Thatnkies but... perviepreistess February 29 2008, 19:34:58 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed this! But I must specify as said in my poet's notes this is Aizen's P.O.V. Not Gin's. I'm as I said really speaking from the hip as there's no canon yet (to my knowledge) for Aizen's past or his truth as to his feelings. And I'd very much like to think because of karmic balance of the universe that he wasn't born evil. Same with Gin. I'd like to think he wasn't born this way but his ways became a cult of his indiviuality.

Re: Hehehe Thatnkies but... yawns_widely February 29 2008, 19:42:27 UTC

*blush* Oh dear oh dear. This is fair warning for all those who rush home from work without coffee or any kind of delay of sleep whilst greedily reading all those fictions missed during the daylight hours. *face palms* I am so embarrassed right now! Is it not enough to show myself up in the real world without doing so on here?

Ah well. I like this poem all the more now, for exploring Aizen and giving him more than I can usually appreciate of his character.

Re: Hehehe Thatnkies but... perviepreistess February 29 2008, 19:56:43 UTC

By no means should you be embarassed. I suspected when I wrote this that most would assume this of Gin which is why I wrote it this way!Hehehe! Show you how sadistic I am I wasn't even going to put a p/n down there! I was going to just leave it! But thought that might be cruel! If you delve into the words you'll see how he's speaking to Gin and how it hurts him that he can't honest with the one person he wants because to truly know him would break even Gin. Like said in summary it's hidden from all but it's there.