Comments | peggy_lane: FIC: Harder and Harder to Breathe | Jared/Jensen

peggy_lane

FIC: Harder and Harder to Breathe | Jared/Jensen | NC-17 (2/2)

Dec 09, 2016 19:47

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fic: rps, nc-17, spn_j2_xmas, fic: j2 au

Comments 16

unplugged32 December 10 2016, 08:34:08 UTC

This is a beautifully written story!! Breathtaking!

peggy_lane December 10 2016, 14:14:49 UTC

Thank you so much! So glad you liked it.

deanshot December 11 2016, 01:23:49 UTC

Superbly written story. I really enjoyed reading it.
The slow build up between them and the never really finding out what the hell was going on added to the mystery.
Thanks for sharing.
*hugs*

peggy_lane December 11 2016, 13:28:16 UTC

Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

riyku December 14 2016, 14:31:20 UTC

So, this is the part where I get overly emotional and probably embarrass myself, and then make it worse by begging to get a glimpse inside your brain, because this is phenomenal. I feel like you have laid out a feast of all of my favorite things, poured me a glass of wine, handed me the most comfortable set of slippers I've ever had on my feet and invited me to stay as long as I want. And don't even get me started on your writing. Wow. WOW. I've read this three times, and each time I've found something new to fall in love with ( ... )

peggy_lane December 14 2016, 23:05:29 UTC

Thank you for such wonderful, gushy feedback. Made my day! I've said it before but I have to thank you again for such great prompts and "likes" to choose from. This is the first writing project I've finished in nearly 2 years and a lot of that is because I had your ideas and preferences in mind. It was an (intimidating) honor to write for such a great writer.

Most importantly - it was an honor to write some Jared-teeth for you ;)

meesasometimes December 14 2016, 14:33:18 UTC

ugh, just gorgeous. It was so essentially a will they? when will they? lovestory with a very interesting questionable setting where none of the questions really needed to be addressed. That what every story in this fandom should be lol...wonderful!!!!!

peggy_lane December 14 2016, 23:07:15 UTC

Thank you so much! I enjoyed thinking about the world building while limiting it to Jensen's POV so I'm glad that worked for you.

madebyme_x December 15 2016, 16:24:17 UTC

What a delicious fic!!! From start to end I was glued to my screen, and your world building really drew me in. Seeing Jared and Jensen grow closer, and seeing Jensen fight his desire for Jared, and his need to protect him from the harsh and alien world, but also from himself.

Perfect characterization and premise, and I could read thousand and thousands more word of this and never tire. Thank you so much for sharing. Take care :)

peggy_lane December 15 2016, 22:39:09 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.