It's that time again! It's time for ramblings and such about my last chapter and other things as my story moves forward. If you haven't read my last chapter, you might not want to look under the cut.
You know my motto: "it's your party, and you can make 'em cry if you want to." Did I say "why is Zane being all mean to SJ?" I don't *think* I did. He lashed out. It's never nice to be the person lashed out AT, no. But Lord, yes, when you are bummed out, you do not want someone saying chirpily, "Cheer up, Brian! Things could be worse!" That's why when I wrote Zane in that one bad situation, I pretty much had him doing the same thing: being furious, angry, distressed beyond belief, and it would be heartless to minimize his pain
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Iiiiiinteresting information on the last chapter *hmm*
And oh god, I know what you mean with sims in college, except I don't have that shorter semester hack. I speed 3 it for real (and only intervene if they're literally going to die - it's their own fault for being stupid besides that), and then stage it for story >.<
Baaaaaabyyyyyy! :D (Whose name I do know but wasn't mentioned here, so I'll squee over it silently :P)
I've not been able to read this chapter properly yet (stupid slideshare is being full of fail, but I plan on trying to find a way around it, don't you worry) but I did glance at this quickly and wanted to say that what I've managed to read of the Zane/SJ scene was fantastic and very, very realistic. Well the emotional intensity, the whole Nameless thing, not so much, but I'm sure you know what I mean. Zane isn't going to ever be the same, and if he didn't have that sort of a breakdown, and then find that switch inside to allow him to continue functioning, well I'd have been disappointed. He needs time. That's all that can ever be said of grief. People need time to find a way through the day, and he's no different.
Anyway, I'm starting to ramble, when I should be starting work, but I wanted to get that out there quickly.
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And that headbutt of Zane's looks like it hurts...
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LOL at the college stupidity. Mine generally aren't as bad as that. I think Archie's the only one I ever had to be like, "TAKE A DAMN SHOWER."
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And oh god, I know what you mean with sims in college, except I don't have that shorter semester hack. I speed 3 it for real (and only intervene if they're literally going to die - it's their own fault for being stupid besides that), and then stage it for story >.<
Baaaaaabyyyyyy! :D (Whose name I do know but wasn't mentioned here, so I'll squee over it silently :P)
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Anyway, I'm starting to ramble, when I should be starting work, but I wanted to get that out there quickly.
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