Comments | pcdarkrose: Fic: Your Own Personal Jesus (Paire)

pcdarkrose

Fic: Your Own Personal Jesus (Paire)

Jan 13, 2008 22:31

Title: Your Own Personal Jesus
Chapters:1/1
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Paire
Word Count: 910
Warnings: sex, canon, demented!Peter
Summary: Peter wants Claire to never forget who her hero is.
Author’s Note: This is so much different from my other ones less angst and more dark. I'm proud of it.

He rested on her as their breaths slowed returning from a ( Read more... )

fanfic, heroes: paire, heroes

Comments 19

meli_64 January 14 2008, 06:13:41 UTC

Ooo, quite demented indeed. Great! :D

pcdarkrose January 15 2008, 06:30:22 UTC

lol I'm glad you agree. Thanks for reading :)

boombangbing January 14 2008, 12:45:15 UTC

Oh wow, this is creepy and good, and so demented. I can see Peter getting like this, what with his need to be a hero and all. Great work!

pcdarkrose January 15 2008, 06:32:47 UTC

Thanks :D

During S2 it seemed like Peter could easily delude himself in the name of saving the world (Nathan).

shampoo January 14 2008, 14:42:17 UTC

....awhoaoaaaaaaa.

I GET IT.

*took a second, is low on sleep*

oh, that is demented. *pleased*

pcdarkrose January 15 2008, 06:38:02 UTC

haha Thank you!

Sleep should always come before reading fanfic *said the hypocrite* :D

paynesgrey January 14 2008, 19:03:25 UTC

Whoa, awesome. That last line was a shocker. The entire piece is very moving.

pcdarkrose January 15 2008, 06:38:56 UTC

Aw, thanks :)

alwaysenduphere January 14 2008, 20:50:27 UTC

oooh.
Demented Peter indeed.

Actually, now that I'm thinking too much into it, you could play off that he's using Sylar's "see how it works" power to figure out what he's gotta do to get her back. *ponders*

Anyway, good job!

Oh, and PS...Rafe was like the best thing to happen to Port Chuck in forever. :)

pcdarkrose January 15 2008, 06:44:47 UTC

ah, that would be interesting!

Thank you :)

*squeal* I love meeting fellow PCers! Oh and yes he was hands down. I got to know what ship you sailed on PC!

alwaysenduphere January 15 2008, 13:55:07 UTC

gosh, it's been so long...
i remember loving Rafe with Allison, of course.
I think near the end of the show I was okay with Caleb and Livvie...
Frank and Karen (I think) had my heart at one time too.

pcdarkrose January 16 2008, 19:12:36 UTC

Those two couples dominated the show to the point that there's no way any one could watch the show and not be okay with Rali or Calivia haha.

Aw Frank/Karen. I was never in to them, but TPTB hacked them too bits, it was hard not to pity them.