When the Night Comes In

[pandora_culpa]

Title: When the Night Comes In
Rating: PG-13ish
Word Count: 3312
Summary: "We're too late." Seemingly unconnected murders are not so random after all, and Riza realizes the terrible choice she will have to make.
Warnings: Character death
Author's Note: Okay, so this is not delicious cake. This is an ugly, nasty little story regurgitated

Comments

[sonjajade]

Nice. I can buy Ed going off the deep end and murdering people. Great fic!

[pandoraculpa]

Thank you! Poor Ed, I'm so mean to him, but yeah, it seems like one tragedy too many could easily push him over the edge. Now I need to go write something fluffy for him. ;)

Thanks for reading!

[lazylamia]

There is nobody who is capable of taming Ed. Even Al is not a reason for him to stop. Riza can only watch how he plunged into the pain and revenge till the verge of insanity.
Great job.

[pandoraculpa]

It kind of hurt, writing him so far beyond reason and outside of himself. But the idea for the story was too compelling to refuse. Thanks for reading!

[hellbentllama]

no. too. sad. !.

[pandoraculpa]

*pats* I'm sorry! But I couldn't refuse this bunny; it bit me for weeks before I finally broke down. But don't worry- happier fics are in the works! Thanks for reading!

[amethyst_koneko]

*wibbles* One has to wonder if Ed used that glove to incinerate General Whitmore or at least burn the house to the ground after he killed the general. A rather poetic ending that - using Roy's glove to kill the one who killed him.

[pandoraculpa]

I'm pretty sure that's exactly what Ed did. Whether he could control the flames like Roy, I don't know, but even if he sent the whole house to hell with himself inside I don't think he'd care too much, at this point. And you know he'd sure as hell maintain his focus until he knew Whitmore was dead.

Poor Ed. I'm so mean to him. I need to write something happy now.

Thanks for reading!

[greedy_lover]

Very powerful story. Moving too. Poor Ed ): Having to lose Roy.. I can imagine that would send him off the deep end. Enjoyed it very much :)

[pandoraculpa]

Glad you liked it! I don't know why I get these ideas; I'm so cruel to my two favorite boys. Ed is so strong, and yet it seems like he could break if the wrong thing happened. Losing someone so close to him... yeah. ;_;

Thanks for reading!