Two Of Us (part 7 of 8)

[pandora_culpa]

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[enemytosleep]

*bites fingernails*

Caught a typo:

Surprisingly, Ed had developed an inexplicable protective attitude regarding him. The military bred thick skins, and the office crew tended to deal with heartbreak and other disappointments through jokes and disparagement, but where it concerned Roy and Sophie, Ed would have none of it. While driving them to Headquarters one morning, Havoc tried to make a weak joke that perhaps this was Roy's comeuppance for stealing so many girlfriends in the past. It was an unintentionally callous remark, and thought it stung, Roy wasn't offended- he deserved it, after all-

[pandoraculpa]

Yikes- another one to correct! Thanks for letting me know!

[xancredible]

I think having all the facts (and I mean all the facts) would greatly influence Ed's decision. It probably would not have taken him three days to make it, even.