Comments | painhumbles: [Fic] Pay the piper, pay your dues. I don't have that much left to lose.

painhumbles

[Fic] Pay the piper, pay your dues. I don't have that much left to lose.

Aug 18, 2010 14:31

Prompt: Wombat, requested by rayney_day
Word Count: 1247
Characters: Gabriel, Chuck Shurley
Timeline/Verse: Non-specific, but post- 5X19: Hammer of the Gods
Disclaimer: I don't own Supernatural. Chuck Shurley is not binding to any journal.

( 'Cause I'm all alone and I think someone left me... )

[what] fic, [who] chuck shurley, [verse] canon

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dancinpenguins August 18 2010, 23:46:15 UTC

Awwwwww that was seriously wonderful, and I love the way you write God!Chuck. ♥

notarrowette August 19 2010, 05:19:06 UTC

I loooooooove this! VERY, VERY MUCH. It's perfect!

paterelohim November 18 2010, 08:48:45 UTC

/breathes

This was lovely. (Hi, Jessifer-mun here!) The host concept isn't how I write my God!Chuck, but otherwise, woof. This was perfect. Lovely, and gorgeous. Gorgeous, believable, with amazing characterization of Chuck- so similar to the way I write him that it's actually kind of eerie. His flailing, and the awkwardness, and this: This wasn’t the sort of behavior one expected from God, but He’d gotten used to being undercover. Things happened.

Just... unf.

painhumbles November 18 2010, 19:47:30 UTC

Oh God, this still exists. I'd totally forgotten about it, lol.

OMG THANK YOU. ;__; I seriously wrote it because... Eric probably thought I wouldn't write "Gabriel, God, and a wombat" and have it be a serious fic, so I was just FFF I CAN'T WRITE CHUCK, BUT I WILL TRY. /breathes And it really makes me happyflail that you liked it. *__* Because you're awesome. (kjsaa SERIOUSLY, YOU PLAY CHUCKGOD TOO? YOUR LIFE IS OSSUM.)

paterelohim November 18 2010, 19:54:09 UTC

Haha, the best things often come from "I bet you wouldn't-"s. Hee, thank you! *blushes madly* You got his dialogue and the little nervous gestures down really well, it was a joy to read.

Although I totally didn't get the wombat thing, ngl. Was Gabriel the wombat? Was the wombat a sign? Was it his sled? Did Gabriel survive Luci's attack, or did the wombat resurrect him? THEN WHO WAS PHONE????

YES CHUCK!GOD JUST MOVED INTO MY HEAD ONE DAY AND WAS LIKE "SUP, TIME FOR YOU TO PLAY A DUDE FOR REAL" AND I WAS ALL JIGGA-WAT AND THEN I DIDN'T FAIL AND IT WAS A WONDER TO BEHOLD.

painhumbles November 18 2010, 19:56:16 UTC

I DON'T GET IT EITHER. I needed a wombat. I started the fic with a wombat and then forgot about it when I got to the intense discussion part of the meeting, and then went, MAYBE NO ONE WILL NOTICE. But someone did. You have found my shame. /hangs head

WHOO! :D

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