Part 03 - Chapter 16 - Vengeance is mine say-eth The TARDIS

[othermewriter]

Verity had closely watched to ensure the Doctor was stable before moving on to the project she had going on in a sealed room far away from the infirmary.

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I know he is stable and that is the most important thing, something I will take into consideration as I show the Essarrian lieutenants the error of their ways. I will, however,

Comments

[tripocket]

Wow. I wasn't expecting this solution. It's a good one. And go Jack for seeing the truth of the situation! Can't wait to see how the Doctor handles himself through this.

[othermewriter]

*wipes forehead* I was really worried about this chapter and how it would be received and I think it helps explain why the TARDIS was willing to help make Jack immortal. It just never sat well with me that it was a mistake that he became the way he did.

[wiggiemomsi]

You, know, this ending blew me away. I was thinking more "bloody retribution" instead of "justice," but think that you hit it just right!

Verity has a conscience, a sense of moral right and wrong; what a gal! And that Jack ... if I wasn't so much in love with the Doctor, it'd be with Jack! Although ... hmmmmmm ... a happy threesome?

*Hugs*

[ravynkage]

I generally a lurker when it comes to fanfics, an I originally started reading this on AFF.net, then on teaspoon, I’m so glad I decided to try an find you on LJ, As I can actually comment on this now. I Love This Story. All the points of view, the details, and the way you write the characters ‘specially Verity, is just so good. ^^

I can't wait to read what happens next.

[othermewriter]

Thank you for coming out of lurker-doom. I am very glad to hear your liking it. I know that what I have been writing has been pretty intense and due to the lack of feedback I was beginning to get a bit concerned that I was writing this just for me.

[othermewriter]

*BIG SMILE* I am so happy you approve of Verity's solution. I had been concerned it wouldn't go over well after showing how justified she was in capturing the Essarians.