On the Other Side of You (4/?)

[orionsroad]

Title: On the Other Side of You, chapter 4
Summary: Yunho sets out to find his siren again.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3I started getting really embarrassed writing this chapter, though I’m entirely unsure why - I’ve written a lot worse. ^^; No idea when the next capter will be up, as I've not written anything for it. I find the Jae side harder

Comments

[thy_stalker]

oooo yay! go yunho!! *dances* ^^ this was a pretty awesome chapter <3 >>..i found one little uhh...mistake i think...in the fourth to last paragraph you said
"...but Jaejoong’s finger slid down to tap him..." o.o...did you really mean Jaejoong or did you mean to put Youngwoong??

[orionsroad]

ZOMG, THANK YOU for pointing that out. No, Jae didn't suddenly pop in there, it was meant to be Youngwoong. The ENTIRE way through this chapter I kept starting to type 'Jae~' instead of Youngwoong. ^^; So thanks for catching the one I totally missed. XD

[thy_stalker]

heh sok XD ive done that before (with different characters tho >>; because i cant write jaeho X-x)..and you're welcome dear ^_^ *~waits for the next chapter~*

[oncloud999]

omgg!!! that was great!! i relaly wonder what the connection between Youngwoong and JaeJoong is. i think it's a split personality...?? haha, Youngwoong is such a tease, and he has Yunho totally hooked. XD

thanks for the update!!

[orionsroad]

:D You'll have to see~! lol. I don't think the explanation is going to be anything fantastic, but... eh. I hope you'll enjoy it when it comes anyway.

Yup yup - Yunho is well and truely baited and hooked. And obsessed. XD XD Youngwoong has him wrapped around his little finger. ^_^

[shienri]

:Q_____________

...*is dead*

[orionsroad]

PADDLES! .... CLEAR~! *zap*

XD

[shienri]

Haha XD I'm ALIVE to read more JaeHo!! RAWR!

There's a drink known as a handjob? O____o

I have learnt something new today!!! XDXD

[mikomi_tears]

Wow...just wow! More of the wall...and more of the too hot to handle youngwoog. *melts into fangirl goo* ♥♥♥

[orionsroad]

.. I love your icon. *stares some more* Hehehe.. Dongbanging. XD

I'm glad you've enjoyed all it so far! Especially the walls... hehe. Yeah, Youngwoong is a bit scalding hot, isn't he? Maybe Yunho will eventually be able to get a handle on him, but ah, we'll have to see! *pets the goo* ^_____^

[tumi18]

HOTHOTHOT!
omo! i shouldnt have read this in the office..
now i cant concentrate on my work >.<
damn!
i love youngwoong!
such a tease <33333
and yunho's acting like a lovesick puppy xDD
mooooooooooooooooore! ^_^

[orionsroad]

haha! Yeah, it's a bit... not work-safe. ^^; lol, sorry for distracting you so much!

Glad you enjoyed it though - Youngwoong is such a tease, and he's really got Yunho all figured out. He knows how to play him really well!

Thanks for the comment... I'll try to get some more out in a reasonable time, but I need to like, figure out what's happening next. ^^;