Very nice. I love that you used this prompt three different ways for the various points in Joyce's life. I particularly liked the second one - the description of the "liquid bridge over the troubled waters of Buffy's adolescence" was perfect.
Great character to concentrate on here. At the end I was expecting tears and the final thought about Buffy and Dawn's chance at happiness was a pleasure.
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Different, but that's what makes it good.
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